Laws of Attraction

I think I feel a connection,

A possible spark of affection,

That may deserve some attention,

Or at least somewhat of a mention,

That there may be some sexual tension,

An arousal or even erection,

And you may have a slight allocation,

But don't cause an amplification,

For lack of communication,

I'll say it without hesitation,

And perfect articulation,

 

I think that I'm falling for you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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I really think the title is self explainatory..if this is a dilemma to you! great monorhyme, not over done or forced..good flow..liked it :)

[Andrew Tyler McCown]

you don't introduce any kind of dilemma in the poem, so I don't think that the title fits well with the poem.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Great poem , I love it ! :) yos

[Mariah]

Wow..nice. It seems very few people can pull off a poem like this. The ending line made it all for me, since it totally stands out from the rest of the poem. Awesome.