Shattered

My soul is shattered
I lie on the floor
The feeling rips the flesh of my bones
I cry
Where are you?
Why are you gone?
Can you even hear me scream?

Author's Note

sorry about the uber-emo pic...

Reviews

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

This poem is exactly how i feel right now having gone through all of the upset thanks for making me realise how life can really suck

[..R.I.P..]

This piece is short, but it packs one hell of a punch! I loved it. I had actually written a poem at one point that was titled "Shattered", but I didn't post it. Keep up the good work.

[ScorpioPoet]

short and filled with emotion...great job!

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I really liked this poem.

It was short but really spoke to me.

Keep up the good work!

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