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This one won me a contest. I'm not a big fan of it but thought others might enjoy it... ENJOY!!!

Help,Help
The Man Would Yelp
We'd go and see
the man in the tree
And we said with a frown
"Well won't you come down?"

We stayed there for days
underneath the suns rays
till one day when he did shout
help,help get me out
We Pushed and we pulled
for as long as we posibly could

We sat on the lawn
from dusk to dawn
Til he fell out of the the tree with a bump
I almost took a dump
He was dead as we could tell
What the hell?

Author's Note

Eh

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

It was good, really interesting

Note: "possibly" it's spelled with 2 s.

"Til he fell out of the the tree with a bump"
You repeated the word "the" twice here.

But other than those mistakes, you did really well on this piece. Good write. Thanks for sharing.