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A Poem by fangs1111
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written whilst tipsy

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i see into the heart of ur soul
and i say hi beautifull
and u hear nothing
for i am only a speck of dust on ur life
but i am building my way into ur heart
i may become a lover
but i will be a good friend
for that is who i am
the friend of all
but never the boyfriend
atleast not for long...

© 2009 fangs1111


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fangs1111
written whilst tipsy

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enjoyed , understood , agreed
always the playmate never the boyfriend
indepth and interesting.
i like it will read more of your work .

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.
"but i will be a good friend
for that is who i am
the friend of all
but never the boyfriend
atleast not for long..."
Powerful words...Nice job :)
Very great read and write,
~Lauren

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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fangs1111
fangs1111

Bracknell, United Kingdom



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