stars

not to sure about this one i have been very depressed recently

 

I look at the stars with my eyes so wide

With an empty spot next to me

A space for you

So we can star up into the stars together

Wondering how life will be

The fun and adventure we will have

I await the day that I can do this with you

I wait here every night for you

For that day you remember how much you love me

For the day you put that ring back on your finger

To be proud that you are engaged to me

And until that day I will await for you here on this hill

With the stars shining brightly above

And all my hopes and dreams of us together

shining just as brightly in my mind.

Author's Note

not quite finished but please be honest

Reviews

[Rainbow Rider]

Don't know why you say this is unfinished, I think it is perfectly written and doesn't need any more added to it. Unless of cousre you are talking about it continuing once he returns?

Anyway, nicely written, a good ride but with a few bumps. The sentiment and felings are easily felt by the reader.,,,,,,,Mhk Melvin