"Morning" and "Summer Days"

Just my two little poems on the top of my head.

 

"Morning"

 

Love is in the air.

Smiles are everywhere.

no faces with frowns.

 

no scary clowns.

It's quiet not a single noise.

so then it must be day.

or else why do my lips curl up?

 

written by: Saaim S. Ali

 

 

"Summer Days"

 

Smell the air.

Roses, Lily's and dandelions.

 

Fresh and pure you breath.

Smiling, pure and bright into the sky.

 

Mother earth watches you from down above.

As you smiles, breathe with your soul.

 

As you look at those blossoming flowers. 

 

Written by: Saaim S. Ali

Author's Note

Sorry if I don't make sense or if it isn't good I've never actually written a poem. I spend an hour writing something for all of you and it ended up getting deleted it's so sad. No worries I'll start it fresh tomorrow.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Love is in the air.

Smiles are everywhere.

no faces with frowns.



no scary clowns.

[Saaim]

do you liked those lines?

[Sami Khalil]

I do...Good...:)...................

[Laminators Dubai]

it does make sense my friend...and its really readly indeed.
keep writing ...you re good in that^^

[Saaim]

Thank you so much to tell you the truth I wasn't sure if it made sense. You keep writing too

[Laminators Dubai]

I'm On it my friend...thanks^^

[Saaim]

Okay my friend I look forward to it

[Laminators Dubai]

it does make sense my friend...and its really readly indeed.
keep writing ...you re good in that^^

[Saaim]

thank you sorry for the late comment

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:>).................

[Saaim]

thank you so much I'm not a fan of writing poems but I thought I'd try.

[Sami Khalil]

A good one...You are welcome...:>)

[Saaim]

Thank you so much you keep up the good work too

[Sami Khalil]

I will...You are welcome...:>)