ONE DAY

Little by little I see it all flow

My anger, my pain and my glow

My smile has gone far away

Torment and anguish in foreplay

When did I lose my heart and soul

Breathlessly wondering who stole.....


My prayers for death are unheard

Wonder whose prayers are answerd

My life passes by at a fast pace

But one day I will find my space

A day when I will finally have it all

Happiness and laughter over all.....

Reviews

[Saddam]

A believing write.
Great read friend.

[J.R.H.]

Great poem.

The pursuit of happiness doesn't come easy for all.

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)

[nazia]

I wish that day comes soon when you find all the happiness and laughter you want. Such a painful yet beautiful poem to write Cersie. amazing. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)

[Confuser]

Cerise: Heartwrenching and captivating...The theme is so very sad; full of passion and relatable: Such suffering and despair.....Wow!
My smile has gone far away
Torment and anguish in foreplay
When did I loose my heart and soul
Breathlessly wondering who stole.....

Raw, painful packed full of emotions depth. Bravo...Loved it. Thank you so much. Dale

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)

[Confuser]

Y/W...you are so very talented!

[Cerise]

Aww..its very kind of you...:)

[Confuser]

Y/W....Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe most of us must suffer to know happiness.
"But one day I will find my space
A day when I will finally have it all
Happiness and laughter over all..... "
The above lines are the goals of the most of us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

Great write, very fluent and graceful!
Can feel the emotions and for very good reasons,
stay patient it's a virtue:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)