ONE DAY

Little by little I see it all flow

My anger, my pain and my glow

My smile has gone far away

Torment and anguish in foreplay

When did I lose my heart and soul

Breathlessly wondering who stole.....


My prayers for death are unheard

Wonder whose prayers are answerd

My life passes by at a fast pace

But one day I will find my space

A day when I will finally have it all

Happiness and laughter over all.....

Reviews

[Subrat]

Like always. Nice. Everything which goes comes back like me......hey its lovely like you.

[Cerise]

Thank you....

[Sunny Skye]

Sounds like you're going through a tough time, it will get better. Beautifully written, rhythmic and short. Good Job!

[1VJ]

Sounds like a very bad day, luckily they pass and we're given new chances at happiness and laughter.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Yes, the storms will pass and your mind and soul will return!

Powerful writing! :)

[MOON]

Living hope beautiful rhythmic write.

[Gee]

Well I hope you do,but don't hold your breath...

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Keep holding on the hope. Nicely written.

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Anytime. Sorry I took forever to read your poem. I've been busy with school and training. Plus I have a lot of read requests to get through. Haha! :)

[Cerise]

Hey..dnt be sorry..its aite...thankyou for reading

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[paul sal.....]

the world is round and undoubtedly your smile will find you as it comes around again and will probably smack you in the face and ask " what have you been thinking?!"

[Cerise]

Lol true...

[Seduction]

Emotions can set the fire to any stuff that's written with heart. Your poetry has such power... such a fire to get sat up! Hopes're long-lasting in love so living with 'em is what that makes every spirit strong.. even strong enough to get happiness in hands. Beautiful though heartfelt imagery you have come up with. Wonderful job! ;)

[WILDERNESS]

Nice poem ............... pray all ends well