I FOUND YOU

In the midst of a forest

I found you there

Hiding behind a bush

Rocking back and forth....


Bleedingly depressed 

Trying to eat the pain

With choclate in hand

Crying your heart out....


You were stunnigly confident

Glowing, strong and amazing

How could I not fall for you

A look at you was all it look....


You are crazy no doubt

But hey its no fun if not

Today we walk around 

Without a care on earth...


Away from the simplicity

A run to the wilderness

For we were meant to be

Satisfied and extremely happy....

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Lovely, Cerise. One of my criteria for an outstanding poem is whether it flows naturally and the words sound right when read aloud, and this poem passed that test. Great writing!

[Cerise]

Awwe...thank you sooo mch darlng..it meant a lot....:)

[Ana D S M]

A beautiful love poem cerise!

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Jetta Zippora]

Beautiful write, friend. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Sami Khalil]

You have summed it up marvelously at the last stanza. Bravo and pen on...:)....................

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome....:).......

[Jamestown]

Free flowing peaceful and beautiful, just the way love is supposed to, be!
Terrific write, great imagery and sweet message, love it! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)