I FOUND YOU

In the midst of a forest

I found you there

Hiding behind a bush

Rocking back and forth....


Bleedingly depressed 

Trying to eat the pain

With choclate in hand

Crying your heart out....


You were stunnigly confident

Glowing, strong and amazing

How could I not fall for you

A look at you was all it look....


You are crazy no doubt

But hey its no fun if not

Today we walk around 

Without a care on earth...


Away from the simplicity

A run to the wilderness

For we were meant to be

Satisfied and extremely happy....

Reviews

[Leigh]

Got a mixture of feelings from this, but mostly love and a feeling of connection

[Cerise]

Thaank you for review...:)

[Confuser]

Cerise: Those it was lovely....very sweet: We were all meant to be that happy!! Thank you. Dale

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Confuser]

You're welcome!!!

[Cara]

great poem, love the feeling in it

[Cerise]

Thankyou....:)

[Neon]

Here you open yourself... I mean, you open "your heart" to this page that seems to be bled into words belonged to your longing-spirit. Keep writing!

[Cerise]

Thank you.......

[Leslie Philibert]

Good write with narrative flow..

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice story with a happy ending.
"Today we walk around
Without a care on earth... "
I like the journey and the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to read...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[MOON]

Beautiful write wonderfully conveyed.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Dayran]

A moment of letting go ... to see what we may have hoped to avoid ... but then again ... a change of mind ... settles the issue. Nice ...

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[nazia]

the work is fluid and beautiful.. great job :)

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Chris]

We seldom question our own sanity - we just live within our perceptions. You drew me along and held me from the beginning - why? Because the clarity of your thought was right there. I could taste your intent with each line and appreciated exactly where you were going.

[Cerise]

Thank you soooo very much for ur kind words