I FOUND YOU

In the midst of a forest

I found you there

Hiding behind a bush

Rocking back and forth....


Bleedingly depressed 

Trying to eat the pain

With choclate in hand

Crying your heart out....


You were stunnigly confident

Glowing, strong and amazing

How could I not fall for you

A look at you was all it look....


You are crazy no doubt

But hey its no fun if not

Today we walk around 

Without a care on earth...


Away from the simplicity

A run to the wilderness

For we were meant to be

Satisfied and extremely happy....

Reviews

[solsystemtillnervsystem]

Ah, this is a nice poem. It flows so nicely.

[...]

Very beautiful story. Feels of love and happy they find each other. Is so lovely and sweet I love it.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words...:)

[Renée]

This is so sweet..reminds me of an elderly couple I know..
her boyfriend broke up with her, and her now husband comforted her.. over 55 years married..

[Cerise]

Awww..sooo sweet

[A Soap Mess Stories]

...sounds like what love should be...well written Cerise...

[paul sal.....]

sounds like a lure that captured its prey but ended up attaining more than the orginal goal....love

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[luviva]

"for we were meant to be,
satisfied and extremely happy.."
what better way to finish a great write off than this,
this was catching and it rung in my head minutes after reading the poem.
we all are meant to be satisfied and extremely happy in life but it is the circumstances!!

nice write..
continue inspiring
Joan

[Cerise]

Thank you darling for reading...:)

[Shay]

love the structure of your words within this poem

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[steven sundell]

Very nice Cerise. I especially liked the reference I.e. "you are crazy no doubt,
but there is no fun if not" to quote Salvatore Dali, as well as a personal motto I try daily not to 4-get
"In a mad world,
only the crazy are sane."
Great effort
Steven

[Cerise]

Thank you sooo mch for review....ahhh words well said...Glad to be acquainted with you sir..:)

[Lavender Soya]

This one's thought provoking and absolutely insightful. I love the feeling that you left towards the ending. Wonderful work! :-)

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)

[cycy]

wow at first thought the poem is about a wounded animal in a forest but then with chocolate in hand hhmm guess not but all the same well written it got my curiosity in over drive

[Cerise]

Thaank you for review...:)