An Internal Battle

Whenever I am provoked or angery

Its an internal battle of world war 3

It all depends on the sands of time

One of you must either win or die

Either my throbbing heart of fire or

My common sense dipped in kind....


MY HURT-

When my hurt is multiplied

I see blood red through my eye

Every emotion of hurt is high

I live to kill and all I see is evil

The raw feelings full of havoc

Untl I bleed and the hurt flows

Through tears of despair....


MY PEACE-

When I get the chance to kill my hurt

And let the goodness win within

I loose a teeny tiny little part of me

And a little some more gets burned

I paste my lips together in fear 

And fill my heart with love.....


For once the tongue wages 

I will loose all I have 

My love, blood relations and life.....

Reviews

[Lavender Soya]

Good flow and nice choice of words. I've read it from start to finish. You're rhyme is quite captivating. The emotions and thoughts are palpable. Keep writing!

[Cerise]

Thank you for kind words...:)

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome :-)

[Chris]

a moment of decision - personified and thought-full

[Cerise]

thank you...:)

[nazia]

Interesting write. The way you described the pain hurt and peace are all relatable... very close to the feelings of everyone who reads it... that's the best part... great job :)

[Cerise]

thank you...:)

[Jamestown]

I can relate for sure, as a matter of fact I used some of these exact words
in a piece I did a couple days ago, please check it out, called Angry Cry!
This was a great piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cerise]

thank you...:)