An Internal Battle

Whenever I am provoked or angery

Its an internal battle of world war 3

It all depends on the sands of time

One of you must either win or die

Either my throbbing heart of fire or

My common sense dipped in kind....


MY HURT-

When my hurt is multiplied

I see blood red through my eye

Every emotion of hurt is high

I live to kill and all I see is evil

The raw feelings full of havoc

Untl I bleed and the hurt flows

Through tears of despair....


MY PEACE-

When I get the chance to kill my hurt

And let the goodness win within

I loose a teeny tiny little part of me

And a little some more gets burned

I paste my lips together in fear 

And fill my heart with love.....


For once the tongue wages 

I will loose all I have 

My love, blood relations and life.....

Reviews

[Renée]

The ever present struggle between our two sides.. quite a battle you have written

[A Soap Mess Stories]

life's struggle between anger and peace...well written Cerise...

[Seduction]

Oh, it's quite painful, very emotional enrichment of words you seem to be bled with! Every single word that you've written across's... just a drop of your tears which belong to your own fleecy spirit beloved by some internal battle of world war-3. You're very good at writing dark stuffs... you ain't just write but relinquish yourself to darkness. It's all proven by your insightful & so evocative pieces. Well written.

[Shay]

love this so much thanks for sharing..

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[micky]

This is so true but painful yet still beautiful...pain because this is a reacurring feeling ive come to know rather well...
Well done !:)

[Cerise]

Thank you so mch..:)

[cycy]

very well expressed hun i can sense the raw emotion right through the words,,keep writing

[Cerise]

Thaaaank you sooo mch...

[paul sal.....]

it is time to learn from the time that has proceeded our current place in history.
We are supposed to be smart yet we keep rerpeating the same history. Some one,some town , some nation has to change the course of history.I am certain it starts with the 1 thing..........love

[Cerise]

Well said..I agree with you...Thank you for your review...:)

[Neon]

Love's a creator of blood-relations. Love's itself a 'destroyer' of blood-relations. Love's a reason of world-wars... love becomes a cause to 'lover-wars'. The concept you arouse with the flicker of devastated heart creates a very vivid imagery across your poetic-words. Nice flow of ink as usual.

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur time....

[Neon]

"An Internal Battle" - The title delivers hundreds of photons to the whole poetry itself which explain how the love could be a life-savior as well as... become the battle of 'hearts'. Some kind of deep imagery you put down into words... through the disposal-pipe of your thoughts. Interesting Concept.

[Cerise]

Lol thabk you again

[Neon]

How many times you breathe in a second? (mind if I ask?)

[Cerise]

As many tyms as u....

[Neon]

Really? You didn`t tell me before that you love getting numbed?
Haha

Sorry ... Hey chill.. Relax. I was playing with you.

[Cerise]

U r fprgivn for this

[Neon]

Am I? Hell, what more INTENSIVE thing I have to do which`s not forgiven?
Hey you white cheek, undress yourself and allow me to haunt you.

Sorry... chill. I`m only playing with you,
(Let`s see now, i`m forgive this time or not)

[Neon]

Okay... fine. No need to get stressed. Lol

[Cerise]

-_-.........

[Jennie Baron]

The conflicts and emotions are explained very well here, with good flow and great selection of words. Very well done!

[Cerise]

Thank you for kind words...:)

[WILDERNESS]

Yup that's true, you nailed it with this one FF. Good one ........... liked it v much.