ENGRAVED IN ME

Everytime I throw you out

Leave you and go far behind

I hide in all the weird places 

You find me and act so kind...


The valentines and birthdays

The happy and stressful days

Everytime I find myself in trouble

You are there, through my struggle...


As always you have come back

Now we are back to square one

I dont know why or how you do it

Surprising, how we get back together...


I push you away time and again

But you are a stubborn creature

You find a way straight to my heart

How is it that I could still stay away...


When you are there all around

Yelling your devotion and loyalty

I found you again embedded in my

Thoughts, dreams and deep in my heart............

Reviews

[Tania]

When you are there all around

Yelling your devotion and loyalty

I found you again embedded in my

Thoughts, dreams and deep in my heart............

... Truly beautiful and a lot of emotions :)
Enjoyed this :)

[Cerise]

Thank you sooo much for review...:)

[Rainslover]

This is really good! I enjoyed it so much! I love this! Beautifully written!
There's one of my favorite telly couple on the show and there was a track! The poem perfectly fits it, making my love for this bit more! :)

[Cerise]

Awwwiiii...thank you sooooooo much...it meant a lot....you made my day...which show is it...:p

[Rainslover]

Qubool Hai! The story is not at all good now and I don't watch! But I love the couple esp. of Season 2. Aahil Sanam (Sahil)!
Your Welcome!

[Cerise]

Ahahahah..omgh i lovedddd it the first season watched it for few months they chnged karan and i stopped watching..:p...

[Rainslover]

Are you on india forums?
I watched few epis of season 1, they were good but I mostly fell for QH2 so hard and for Survir! They are so junooni! Just that this season isn't that good!

[Cerise]

Nops but i do check the site once a while...survir??? Which is this one.
.hehehe...

[Rainslover]

Oh! Survir( Surbhi Jyoti + Karanvir Bohra( Survir) actors of Sahil( Sanam + Aahil)! Accha!

[Cerise]

Hhahhaha....aisa..ab samjhi..:p...uff hadd hai tum log b na...:p

[Shay]

i enjoyed this. thanks for sharing. i like the words you used that mixed with the tone.

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Mirza Mehak]

the cuteness of love... brings a smile... loved this one for it simplicity

[Cerise]

Thank yoi for review...:)

[paul sal.....]

it's called........love.......................................................

[Cara]

a very beautiful poem, for me it gives the thought of someone trying there best to stay with the person they love, few comes in the wrong way, others comes right, struggling to stay in the place they must feel safe in, i love it thank you

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[Sindu]

Such a beautiful description. It's great when some fight rather than give up. It doesn't have to be both, just one is enough. Loved to read this fancyfati

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Some relationships are elastic....they jump from being wonderful to being awful....and yet they never totally break. Very emotive write...romantic. Lydi**

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur review...:)

[cycy]

I push you away time and again

But you are a stubborn creature

You find a way straight to my heart

How is it that I could still stay away...


i can totally relate we all have that guy hu alwaes comes back somehow

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur review...:)

[m.s.early]

Love, like an addiction, winds itself around our heart regardless of what the mind contends. Is this the power of the seducer or the weakness of the narrator expressed? The element I appreciate the most is its vast scope for interpretation

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur review...:)