KISMET OR DESTINY

Hoping for the mr right to come along. Because waiting is not everyones forte. How it feels towait for someone you dont know but deep down you feel it all

I am here thinking about you

You are  completely unaware

Every thought of mine is about you

But you have hidden, you dont dare...


Just come in front and let me see

How you look or how you will be

Is it too much to ask to have you

Waiting has not been meant for me......


Come along and hold my hand

Look into my eyes with a burning fire

Its time you came and stood by me

Feel the heat, the friction and passion.....


I know your scent surrounds me

I believe in us because it's you and me

Baby, I know it has to be Faith , Kismet

Or may be just something called DESTINY....

Author's Note

tell me how you feel

Reviews

[Shay]

interesting emotion within your words. thanks for sharing

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Cara]

l know the feeling,and it hurts a lot :
a great poem, tells a lot

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem.
"I know your scent surrounds me
I believe in us because it's you and me
Baby, I know it has to be Faith , Kismet
Or may be just something called DESTINY...."
I like the poetry with good description and question. You have both. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Fran Marie]

A sweet romantic poem..when you find that special someone meant to be part of you..It's a magical connection , a destiny lovematch..nice work...

[Cerise]

Thank you for review

[cycy]

Baby, I know it has to be Faith , Kismet

Or may be just something called DESTINY....

well written dear i liked the title especially

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Strong emotions here in this piece. . .as you wonder who your love is. . .great writing. . .

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[WILDERNESS]

Strong emotions are rapidly flowing, good effort.

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[Benedict Mdluli]

Fantastic, wonderful shows love and passion of poetry & love in general.

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[Benedict Mdluli]

Pleja all mine :)

[Confuser]

I loved it fancyfati. I can relate to it and anyone who reads it can. Very clever writing. We all know someone is out there and we tend to wonder and feel sad, me anyway, until we meet someone special. I loved the way you started out with I am here thinking about you and you are completely unaware..wonderful; this is a poem I would want to share; publish; suppose I am a girl at heart and always will be and think....give this to the one you love, when they are found. Thank you. It is also encouraging to people who haven't found someone. You wrote what many people wish to hear. Great work. Thank you. Dale

[Confuser]

I loved it fancyfati. I can relate to it and anyone who reads it can. Very clever writing. We all know someone is out there and we tend to wonder and feel sad, me anyway, until we meet someone special. I loved the way you started out with I am here thinking about you and you are completely unaware..wonderful; this is a poem I would want to share; publish; suppose I am a girl at heart and always will be and think....give this to the one you love, when they are found. Thank you. It is also encouraging to people who haven't found someone. You wrote what many people wish to hear. Great work. Thank you. Dale

[Cerise]

Awwieee...thank you sooooo much for your wonderful review..it truly made my day..i am glad you liked it..:)