Enrapture

Sunlight filters through

A tear shaped eye opens

A tinge of golden dust falls......

Author's Note

Please feel free to share your views..its my first try

Reviews

[Neon]

Your first try seems like a professional`s top try.

You put your stuffs always around the circle either of love or emotions. In this write, it's about emotions - very deep emotions. Just three lines of the write seemed enough to smash the heart into pieces. You must continue writing such deep stuffs. Keep it up!

All the best if you do bake some more - hot cakes! ;)

[Cerise]

Awwiiiii..thank you sooooooo mch...truly my day cudnt gt any bettr...lol i wll rembr u when i bake ..:D

[Cerise]

Awww..definetly..sadly i dont bake much..:p