CHOICES WE FACE

The emotions of mine will kill me alive

The tempest has arisen and it is so high

The ghouls of my past have seeped in again

The thoughts are hurting, it’s all mundane

One by one, I have killed my own

I swim and bathe in blood of those I have sown

Time is passing like a wicked witch

It’s full of hatred torture and betrayal

However, in all of this I find an innocent pearl

Come to save me from my torment and dooms

It is now or never already, my death looms

The time has come to let go of crooked ways

It is time for goodness to flow through my veins….

Reviews

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Time is passing like a wicked witch...

Beautiful poem for halloween. Nostalgic too!
keep it up!

[Cerise]

Awww...Thank you so mch..:)

[Jennie Baron]

This poem has a very nice flow when I imagine it read aloud. It also has an important theme that you've carried out very well. We all need to let go of those demons and embrace goodness.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[WILDERNESS]

the demons of our past keep arising every once in a while. they say that not hatred but love will bury them forever. But then, easier said than done..................... a good poem.......... liked it.

[Cerise]

Thank you ....

[stars are far]

that was very great work fatie ;).. it was well expressed

[Cerise]

Hehehe..thank you darln...

[Coyote Poetry]

"The time has come to let go of crooked ways
It is time for goodness to flow through my veins…."
I like the journey in the words. A good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for review coyote...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rene Salinas]

Swim and bathe if you want in a bath but it seems more like a entrapment of some sort. I read and I get the feeling you become aware of your own intruder. That presence which irrevocably wants to be in and within you yet attempts so overcome that which is willing to strive. It responds to instinct, it is led by frystration and dissapointment and if not under control it gets the best of us. But again it is the act of awarness which keeps it at bay otherwise we fall prey to it. So , as you observe it and are aware of it you decide it is enough and change the scene you must.

Conscientious

Thankyou

[Cerise]

Thank you for such a great review

[Chris]

bath or bathe?

It's been awhile - how are you doing?

I agree with the premise of this one... it's time to do what needs being done.

[Cerise]

Ahh..am perfectly fine..how are you doing mr?? ..Its been long since i had time to write..:)...Thank you for review...