JUST LET GO......

The time has come for you to go

My feelings will leave even if it's slow

The end has come for us to depart

Your time in my life is over, My heart

I kept you in my life stretching my time

I tried my level best but, I don't give a dime

Am letting you go just go far beyond

Oh my darling!! we did have a great bond

I close my eyes and take a deep breathe

Its difficult to live but I feel my death

Your role in my life has come to an end

But trust me those memories were god send

My love, you will always be my high prize

You were my growth, And My rise

Your happiness will always be my last wish

I close my eyes to imagine our bliss....

Author's Note

No one is going to stay in your life forever....Some day..Somewhere everyone is goign to leave you...Never be dependent on anyone....Its time we all lived our life for ourselves......

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

It's wonderful!! I liked the word choice a lot and what's impressive about this poem, is that your focus on the rhyme didn't take away your keen from keeping the words meaningful and compatible :)
So good💗

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Calibaster]

"Let it go, let it go! Can't hold it back anymore!!"

JK. but that's what your poem made me think of at first.

Well done, I really enjoyed it! :) ;)

[Cerise]

lol..Thank you....:)

[Calibaster]

Your very welcome!

[Neon]

Oh whao.. you so love me! Thanks. I guarantee, this poem`s based on me.. I meant.. written `bout me.. is it? Hey, are you fallen in love of me? Please don`t say no. I know, i`m also in love of you. Any doubt? Oh come on, facy... I know, you`re a killer, come kill me with your love. (Kidding). Umm.. well, now again smile please. I`m sure, you`d smile now instead of being sad seeing me again at the bottom of your heart ;)

[Cerise]

Hahahahahahaha....sumday when i write a poem on u it would be filled with angels and a lot of warmth and love..:p.....oh u dimwit u stll doubting my luv ...how cud u aftr the amount of tym i have proved my luv tym and agan....sob sob....well a smile saved only for u..;)

[Neon]

Haha! You really make me chuckle this time. Well...yeah, write a poem on me and have a devil`s autograph on your beautiful wrist .. Ha (smiling) .. don`t worry, I won`t hurt your smooth wrist. Oh doubt? No ways.. I can never doubt your love .. I know, it`s eternal for me.. am I right? ;)

[Cerise]

Heeheh...i will take u upon ur word..and autograph it is....widout doubt only for u...;D

[Neon]

Thankfully, I got it. Yeah.. yeah.. of course, your wrist`s only only and only for me, no any other evil nor even other devil can grab an angel from me. After all, i`m a king of devils.. am I right?

[Cerise]

Heheheeh...truly u r the king of devils....

[Neon]

And.. you .. the Queen of Angels ;)

[Cerise]

Awww...u compliment me far too mch..i fear the fall from sky to earth wont b a pleasing one

[Neon]

And.. i`d be the one on the standing on the ground to catch you in my arms FIRST ;)

[Cerise]

Heheheh...i would be honured

[Neon]

Please.. try to get fallen right in my arms .. don`t change your direction cause, i`m afraid.. if you get fallen on my head.. what`d happen with my heart! Ha ha ah (Kkidding)

[Cerise]

Heheheh ..meanooo

[Shay]

i really enjoyed the emotion.

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazingly well written piece, loved reading it. Nicely penned.

Kaze~

[Cerise]

Thank you for review..:)

[TL Boehm]

Wise words. Knowing when to let go and actually being able to do it. This poem speaks volumes

[Cerise]

Thank you for review

[Stanley Wilson]

lovely poem written well a lot of emotion contained in it.

[Cerise]

thank you..:)

[paul sal.....]

not always the case, hope you meet someone to live your life with, writing poems and music and building children ;there is is always a future to build a wall of love around, sing a song..........

[Cerise]

thank you..:)

[Lauren]

Love the simplicity and impact that you manage to pack in this poem.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Leslie Philibert]

maybe a little old-fashioned, but the rhymes and thoughts convince..

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)