Perfect Choice

Love story

My life was a mistake until I met you

Everything would fall into place, I had no clue

All my sorrows and pains were washed

One look at you and I was so lost

The day I met, I knew in my heart

That you are my life and I can’t stay apart

You are my biggest wish come true

I thank god for sending you out of blue

My decision of you was completely right

I chose you, which was perfect and wise

With everyday my love for you shall rise

You are truly my angel in disguise.....

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh my gosh. Words will never share the depth of love I have for this. This brought a smile on my face. It is short and filled with love and affection. The rhyme and beautiful flow made it easier to read and never distracted me from my reading. The title caught my attention first. It had my mind racing with different thoughts before I clicked on it. I am glad that I chose your poem to read tonight. It kept my mind and heart at ease. Its soft and sweet tone is comforting like a lullaby. I like the first word all the way to the very last word. There isn't anything that I didn't like about it. I am impressed! I hope that whoever that this maybe having you under their spell, that everything works out well and that you two will share a happy ending together. Well done! :)

[Cerise]

Awwwwww.....this is the best review ever..thaaank you so much for taking time to read my peace..am soo glad that u liked it....I hope u hav a happy ending tooo...thank you for making my day a wonderful one with such wonderful words..:D...May u get all u wish and tons moree..keep smilling..:)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Thank you so much :) you are very welcome my dear friend.

[Shay]

I really enjoyed this poem, it is short but conceals a strong message. this piece is well written and I liked the message. short and sweet , thank you for sharing :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking tym to read it..:)

[kublakhan27]

A lovely declaration of love and devotion...well done :)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Madalyn Beck]

So beautiful and the feelings you describe are truly out shining the sun. Love is a beautiful thing. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Stefanie Holmes]

"One look of you and I was so lost" I believe 'of' in this line should be 'at'
It truly is a remarkable feeling when we find the 'one' we are meant to be with in life. You captured that feeling well in this piece. :)

~Stefanie

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[Rita L. Sev]

A lovely Love Story... *sigh* :)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[stars are far]

That is very sweett... :D
It is well written..good work :)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)

[Dayran]

A great way to represent your experience. Nice.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem, maybe chose would be better than choose as the line is in the past tense..

[Cerise]

Ahh...Thank you

[Calibaster]

I've been waiting to meet someone like that.

[Cerise]

Aww..u will sumday..:)

[Calibaster]

I hope so. :)