Perfect Choice

Love story

My life was a mistake until I met you

Everything would fall into place, I had no clue

All my sorrows and pains were washed

One look at you and I was so lost

The day I met, I knew in my heart

That you are my life and I can’t stay apart

You are my biggest wish come true

I thank god for sending you out of blue

My decision of you was completely right

I chose you, which was perfect and wise

With everyday my love for you shall rise

You are truly my angel in disguise.....

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh my gosh. Words will never share the depth of love I have for this. This brought a smile on my face. It is short and filled with love and affection. The rhyme and beautiful flow made it easier to read and never distracted me from my reading. The title caught my attention first. It had my mind racing with different thoughts before I clicked on it. I am glad that I chose your poem to read tonight. It kept my mind and heart at ease. Its soft and sweet tone is comforting like a lullaby. I like the first word all the way to the very last word. There isn't anything that I didn't like about it. I am impressed! I hope that whoever that this maybe having you under their spell, that everything works out well and that you two will share a happy ending together. Well done! :)

[Cerise]

Awwwwww.....this is the best review ever..thaaank you so much for taking time to read my peace..am soo glad that u liked it....I hope u hav a happy ending tooo...thank you for making my day a wonderful one with such wonderful words..:D...May u get all u wish and tons moree..keep smilling..:)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Thank you so much :) you are very welcome my dear friend.

[Moniba]

Lovely poem:) Perfect rhyme and rhythm, and the tone is exactly how it needs to be.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[icelandicblue]

This is a very lovely poem filled with joy and happiness.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah you crazy kids today ...............

[Cerise]

lol...what can i say..:P

[A Soap Mess Stories]

A wonderful work of love...true love...

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Bowers]

this was beautiful, we are constantly searching until we find the one we love, arent we? great write!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Mark]

Very nice. Love is so fulfilling isn't it?

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Anyone who came to our lives who touches our souls are angels to us.
I love the concept. It reminds me of my pieces about my angel.
Thanks for the share.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love it its so romantic and beautiful. A simple poem that is simply about being greatful for what/whom you have. Deep meaning to this write.
I loved the rhyming to, well writen. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[Brave girl]

"i chouse you,which was perfect and wise
with everyday my love for you shall rise
you are truly my angel in disguise"
that was my fav part, actually the whole poem was wonderful,brimming with love and care! well done dear writer!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Brave girl]

you're welcome

[Linda alexander]

I thank god for sending you out of blue
My decision of you was completely right
Excellent writing, profound flow of imagination with great footing on reality, lucky that poet got the angel

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for such a wonderful review....it meant a lot..:)

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care