Perfect Choice

Love story

My life was a mistake until I met you

Everything would fall into place, I had no clue

All my sorrows and pains were washed

One look at you and I was so lost

The day I met, I knew in my heart

That you are my life and I can’t stay apart

You are my biggest wish come true

I thank god for sending you out of blue

My decision of you was completely right

I chose you, which was perfect and wise

With everyday my love for you shall rise

You are truly my angel in disguise.....

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh my gosh. Words will never share the depth of love I have for this. This brought a smile on my face. It is short and filled with love and affection. The rhyme and beautiful flow made it easier to read and never distracted me from my reading. The title caught my attention first. It had my mind racing with different thoughts before I clicked on it. I am glad that I chose your poem to read tonight. It kept my mind and heart at ease. Its soft and sweet tone is comforting like a lullaby. I like the first word all the way to the very last word. There isn't anything that I didn't like about it. I am impressed! I hope that whoever that this maybe having you under their spell, that everything works out well and that you two will share a happy ending together. Well done! :)

[Cerise]

Awwwwww.....this is the best review ever..thaaank you so much for taking time to read my peace..am soo glad that u liked it....I hope u hav a happy ending tooo...thank you for making my day a wonderful one with such wonderful words..:D...May u get all u wish and tons moree..keep smilling..:)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Thank you so much :) you are very welcome my dear friend.

[modtoddinc]

Good job, I like the comparison of a mistake to love in disguise; a pearl within an oyster, a hidden treasure, not everything is as it appears. Be aware of tense... past/present, and singular/plural. (ie. I/We met?) This may have been intentional, but distracted me slightly from the message.

~peace, Todd

[Cerise]

Thank you for review...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful hopeful poem for love. I liked how you led to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

thank you sooo much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Neon]

But, i`m a devil ...Oh.. okay, okay.. you said an angel "IN DISGUISE".. Okay.. okay.. I got it. Thanks. Yeah, me too feeling very happy to have you... outta blue. (Kidding) ;)

Nice poetry. It`s been a long time since I`d read such romantic poetry written with emotions. Liked the structure of the write; the outlines (story-line) .. all things`re perfect. You cool, fancy ;)

[Cerise]

Hehhehe...crazy guy.....thank you mr....

[Neon]

By the way, i`m free.. as you know, so just thought to check out your few more stuffs. Hope you don`t mind! ;)

[Cerise]

The only thing i would mind is if i dont see ur comment on every stuff of myn...y on earth wud i eva.mind
.u r my angel in disguise...

[Neon]

Whao! That`s what I wanted even expected to hear from you. Thanks.. it`s seemed you`ve hear the wandering voices of my evily heart. (Chuckling) ;)

[Cerise]

Hehehe well am glad that i lived up to ur expectation...

[Neon]

You always live up to my expectations, Fancy.

[Cerise]

O.o........

[Jennie Baron]

This really touched my heart, but then my heart has a soft spot for truly romantic poetry. Lovely, and a perfect read to end my evening.

[Cerise]

Awww...thank you sooo much...:)..it meant a lot

[AlyshaN]

your poem explains exactly where i am :D
I love it

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Nice little poem of love and happiness.
Well done.
Clive.

[Cerise]

thank you...:)

[Laura Harrison]

This is how I feel about my fiance. I was in a bit of a rut at the time we met and he helped me out of it. Great piece

[Cerise]

Thank you...I hope u both have a happy life forever and dat u both fyt every difficulties dat come in ur path..:)

[Melody-Rene Belle]

I love this poem, I can really relate to this... Thanks!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)