Realm Of Hidden Angels

A poem on poor kids

Every time I see a tear falling through their eye 
My heart cries at what their destiny decides.. 
Have faith in lord , Oh  children's of god
The day will come it will all be solved.....

You are the precious jewels that need to be cleaned
Your beauty is hidden and slightly unseen 
But trust me one day you will rise high
I wonder why those precious darlings, "sigh".....

Every time I see those tiny angels without food 
I praise the lord for every thing sweet and good 
One day you will shine and the world will be bright 
It will be a new day and a beautiful sight......

There will come a time when you will smile 
And everything will become right and worthwhile
Trust you'r lord for he is the mighty, One to save 
God will give you without doubt all that you crave.... 

The pain will vanish it wont stay for long 
Wonderful memories will fill them along 
Don’t question too much why or how

Don't give up hope, not right now.....

The war among good and bad  goes with time

But when happy time comes trust me, its divine

The people with money have a lot to learn

Be grateful for everything you earn....

Author's Note

Its about those poor kids who roam around the land without any reason to live still they survive. Its sad that we have so much to thank god for and still we are ungrateful. Its time we learned a lesson from them.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear poet.. You are the precious jewels that "need"
to be cleaned. "Without 'any' reason to live". Learning
proper grammer is easy if you relax and learn some simple
rules. Your poetry is very generous and heartwarming.
No man is an island. We need to help each other in a
loving and caring way. A little child shall lead them.
I love the innocence of young children and we can
learn from their warmth to be an example of acceptance.
truly... Pat

[Lyn Anderson]

Dear poet hello this is KL Goode. There are ways of correcting one's grammar without being condescending and usually, it is best to spell grammar correctly if you are going to correct someone else. Nice to meet you,

[Cerise]

Ahh thank you both of u....I completely missed it...I might not have seen it while typing..But Thank you again for showing me the flaws..

[Patricia Wedel]

dear KL Goode... nice to meet you. Thank you for sharing.
truly... Pat.

[Scott Metro]

It's sad..it hurts..no reason for hungry children other than greed and power mongers.
This is age old and can only be viewed as a very lousy part of the human condition.
Well done..this needs to be in our face..
Scotty

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderful review..:)

[Scott Metro]

My pleasure..this is a memorable piece..!
S...............

[Sami Khalil]

"Every time I see those tiny angels without food
I praise the lord for every thing sweet and good
One day you will shine and the world will be bright
It will be a new day and a beautiful sight......"

Your poem treads the water of compassion till the knees...Bravo............

[Cerise]

Thank you for your touching review...it meant a lot..:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................