Realm Of Hidden Angels

A poem on poor kids

Every time I see a tear falling through their eye 
My heart cries at what their destiny decides.. 
Have faith in lord , Oh  children's of god
The day will come it will all be solved.....

You are the precious jewels that need to be cleaned
Your beauty is hidden and slightly unseen 
But trust me one day you will rise high
I wonder why those precious darlings, "sigh".....

Every time I see those tiny angels without food 
I praise the lord for every thing sweet and good 
One day you will shine and the world will be bright 
It will be a new day and a beautiful sight......

There will come a time when you will smile 
And everything will become right and worthwhile
Trust you'r lord for he is the mighty, One to save 
God will give you without doubt all that you crave.... 

The pain will vanish it wont stay for long 
Wonderful memories will fill them along 
Don’t question too much why or how

Don't give up hope, not right now.....

The war among good and bad  goes with time

But when happy time comes trust me, its divine

The people with money have a lot to learn

Be grateful for everything you earn....

Author's Note

Its about those poor kids who roam around the land without any reason to live still they survive. Its sad that we have so much to thank god for and still we are ungrateful. Its time we learned a lesson from them.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear poet.. You are the precious jewels that "need"
to be cleaned. "Without 'any' reason to live". Learning
proper grammer is easy if you relax and learn some simple
rules. Your poetry is very generous and heartwarming.
No man is an island. We need to help each other in a
loving and caring way. A little child shall lead them.
I love the innocence of young children and we can
learn from their warmth to be an example of acceptance.
truly... Pat

[Lyn Anderson]

Dear poet hello this is KL Goode. There are ways of correcting one's grammar without being condescending and usually, it is best to spell grammar correctly if you are going to correct someone else. Nice to meet you,

[Cerise]

Ahh thank you both of u....I completely missed it...I might not have seen it while typing..But Thank you again for showing me the flaws..

[Patricia Wedel]

dear KL Goode... nice to meet you. Thank you for sharing.
truly... Pat.

[JRB]

It was. inspiring and pleasurable me to read

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

What a wonderful poem with a hopeful message. Favorite quotes "Trust you'r lord for he is the mighty" and "Be grateful for everything you earn..."

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur wonderful review..:)

[kublakhan27]

Have you ever read William Blake? Your poem and theme are a dead ringer for a piece of his called The Chimney Sweeper...it's about child labour, and tells a story of the maltreated kids dreaming of an angel who comforts them with an assurance of a better fate, but unfortunately they must wake up and continue to tend to their duties until that time comes. But this is an amazing piece in its own right...it is an ambitious and profoundly-expressed mix of lamentation and optimism. It's clear to the reader that it's a subject you're passionate about, and have taken great care in getting that passion across. Well done :)

[Cerise]

Well i have never read but thank you for letting me know i will check it out....Thank you for such wonderful review...:)

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome :)

[Dayran]

Beyond the cradle ... the sweetest of angels grows into a menace by the circumstances of dire poverty ... and lack of a nurturing environment. Our social organizations struggle to keep pace with the dreams of creation. Nice.

[Cerise]

Thank you and i agree wid u completly..:)

[Baby Ricochet]

When I was deployed to Afghanistan I'd never seen poverty like that before. Desperate kids trying to trade us their prosthetic limbs for our MRE'S. (Lots of land mines in Afghanistan so lots of people missing limbs)We did what we could for them but thanks to the big build up for the invasion of Iraq at the time and the fact we were 1000 miles from freaking nowhere out there we were so badly supplied it was ridiculous. God I hated that deployment.

[Cerise]

Awww....am so sorrie u had to go through it..and am glad u shared it with me...its sick that this days ppl see desperate ppl and jus ignore and live wid their life...well hopfully sumday ppl will take notice of dem and save them...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a most educating write .A sit up and take notice poem and filled with hopefulness :)

[Cerise]

Thank you dear...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was beautiful,strong and very meaningful.
Yes it sure is very sad that kids with no food go through so much.
Whats worse is that the people with cold hearts get all the money there the rich ones.
Those who are kind giving and caring are the ones who wind up poor, shouldn't work out like that.
This also rhymes really well and all comes together brilliantly.
I enjoyed this one well written :)

[Cerise]

Thank you soo much..it meant alot..and i agree with you...its sad how the rich becom richer and the poor becums poorer..

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Ye its pretty fucked up.... and your welcome :)

[Claire in VA]

This is a tremendous message!
Thanks for sharing. Claire :)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Frieda P]

I love the title, it's so apropos, unless someone brings attention to their plight, they usually go unseen, unheard, and unnoticed...sad read, but a reality of these hard times. The use of the word 'cum' clashes with the sweet intent of this poem, not sure if English is your second language, it could just be an oversight. Other than that, a truly affecting read.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderfully touching review...oopsieee i must hav not seen it..thnx for telling..:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such a sad situation, I want to help them all but one person can't do it alone… it is wonderful that you are shedding light and praising these beautiful souls. Amen to your big heart.

[Cerise]

Thank you for such a touching review....well am sure if eveyone thinks lyk u we could end up saving all...:)...may u succeed in ur goals

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome. It would be nice to think that could happen.