Realm Of Hidden Angels

A poem on poor kids

Every time I see a tear falling through their eye 
My heart cries at what their destiny decides.. 
Have faith in lord , Oh  children's of god
The day will come it will all be solved.....

You are the precious jewels that need to be cleaned
Your beauty is hidden and slightly unseen 
But trust me one day you will rise high
I wonder why those precious darlings, "sigh".....

Every time I see those tiny angels without food 
I praise the lord for every thing sweet and good 
One day you will shine and the world will be bright 
It will be a new day and a beautiful sight......

There will come a time when you will smile 
And everything will become right and worthwhile
Trust you'r lord for he is the mighty, One to save 
God will give you without doubt all that you crave.... 

The pain will vanish it wont stay for long 
Wonderful memories will fill them along 
Don’t question too much why or how

Don't give up hope, not right now.....

The war among good and bad  goes with time

But when happy time comes trust me, its divine

The people with money have a lot to learn

Be grateful for everything you earn....

Author's Note

Its about those poor kids who roam around the land without any reason to live still they survive. Its sad that we have so much to thank god for and still we are ungrateful. Its time we learned a lesson from them.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear poet.. You are the precious jewels that "need"
to be cleaned. "Without 'any' reason to live". Learning
proper grammer is easy if you relax and learn some simple
rules. Your poetry is very generous and heartwarming.
No man is an island. We need to help each other in a
loving and caring way. A little child shall lead them.
I love the innocence of young children and we can
learn from their warmth to be an example of acceptance.
truly... Pat

[Lyn Anderson]

Dear poet hello this is KL Goode. There are ways of correcting one's grammar without being condescending and usually, it is best to spell grammar correctly if you are going to correct someone else. Nice to meet you,

[Cerise]

Ahh thank you both of u....I completely missed it...I might not have seen it while typing..But Thank you again for showing me the flaws..

[Patricia Wedel]

dear KL Goode... nice to meet you. Thank you for sharing.
truly... Pat.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Such a thoughtful poem with a unique and heart touching theme! Absolutely wonderful.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Wonderful display of faith!!!!:) It makes my heart smile to read that someone else see's things the way I see it and to know that the poor children who don't have what we have are thought of.... And I totally agree that we need to learn a lesson from them:) Great write!!!

[Cerise]

Thank you soo mcuh for such wonderful words...am glad we share same thoughts on this...:)...Thank you again

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

You're welcome:) and so am I:)

[Moniba]

Very well-written...
Best stanza:
"There will come a time when you will smile
And everything will become right and worthwhile
Trust your lord for he is the mighty, One to save
He will give you all that you crave.... "

Just one thing though... Take care of where you place the apostrophes. Your and you're are different. And 'children' is already plural.

[Cerise]

sure..Thank you..:)

[WILDERNESS]

Thats so true and beautifully expressed...................... We are indeed so ungrateful.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Shay]

very nicely written, you convey an important message within this poem .. well done

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Calibaster]

this is really good! I could feel the emotion, and I completely agree! I wish I could help them, but I guess being grateful for what we have is the first step. Well done! ;)

[Cerise]

Thank you for a wonderful review..:)

[Calibaster]

you're very welcome! ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

'The war among good and bad goes with time
But when happy time comes trust me, its divine"
I saw the kids who fought to live another day. They he hearts like mountains. A powerful poem with a message. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for wonderful review....

[A Soap Mess Stories]

A valuable lesson to learn for us all...well written...

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Tina Louise UK]

So very touching, a good message hun :) x

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)