FORGIVNESS IS BITTERSWEET

A mistake that cost a lot but an important lesson was learned...hurting a person for that persons good, Indeed is a very tiring process...

Look deep into my heart

Feel the blood pump through me

Tell me if I did anything that was wrong

If I did, I give you permission to turn around

Without clinging to the past walk far away.......

When the sun rises again

On a beautiful new day

And you feel sad and alone

Know that I am always here

Just like before you walked away........

As the days pass by

And memories began to blur 

As the pain fades

Forgive me and say " HELLO"

Like everything that happened was yesterday.....

I know to you its a past forgotten

Bear with me because I know am rotten

I know I made your heart cry

Even then i had dared to wish you goodbye......

Let the tide of emotions flow through you

Let goodness and forgiveness seize your heart

May you act again like a chivalrous man 

Act like nothing can ever be wrong 

And that we are back together from today

Come back to me like we were never away.......

In your heart I hope you find the sweet way

To exonerate me and forget the bad 

I am ready to bear it all trust me when i say

I am waiting for you to have it your way........

Therefore, I wish your decisions would sway

I hope and pray the bittersweet tingle,

Will unite us again, before sun light peeps in

Announcing the rise of bright new day.......

In the bottom of my heart, you shall  forever reside

I know I gave a huge blow and you are right to be mad

We had an amazing chemistry and wonderful vibe

I guess I will just have to let go, even though I know

That you loved me even if you had to leave me and go.....

“Forgiveness is the fragrance that the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it.” 
― Mark Twain

Author's Note

tell me what you felt

Reviews

[Stanley Wilson]

I felt like a schmuck and needed to say sorry. What a great work all emotions captured really well. Really incisive work.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much..:)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing this wonderful write...:).....................

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:).....................

[Maybe Lina]

This was really wonderful and it was filled with emotions, I couldn't help but to imagine it in a scene and I swear tears almost formed in my eyes from how those words made me just feel I was in this situation and sent chills down my spine.

Excellent work and amazing wording!

[Cerise]

Awwww...Thank you soo much for your wonderful words they touched my heart...u truly made my day with amazing review..:)

[kublakhan27]

There are no perfect bonds when humans are involved, and you've done a wonderful job at capturing all the things that go into a friendship, especially the trials that surface along the way. This is an unabashed statement of loyalty, delivered poetically and eloquently. Well done :)

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for a wonderful review..

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure

[Mark]

A very nice apologetic poem. I felt good after reading it.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[tyson]

forgiveness is a funny thing. I love this scene on forgiveness, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZwztHiRDdGk

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Calibaster]

I love Mark Twain! Is that what inspired that awesome poem?! :) Keep up the good work.

[Cerise]

Thank you...

[Calibaster]

You're welcome!

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the poem, I have to admit I don`t like u or i ( for me sloppy use of English !)

[Cerise]

ahh sorrie..I didnt have time to edit..thank you for reminding..:)

[carol burgess romance]

Doing the right thing can be painful but if it is the right choice the pain will lessen and peace will enter

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[Dayran]

Doing the right thing ... only succeeds when we are able to hold on to the justification for it.

[Cerise]

Agreed..:)