Chapter 1

Chapter 1

A Chapter by Cerise
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A love story about a married couple who have their ups and downs when a huge secret is about to be revealed and everything goes down the drain. Will their love keep them united? or Will they divide?

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Geisha thinks if only she could tell him how much she loved him. How it has been a pure misery and torment living without him. She has hope on their love although it futile after all she was the one who pushed him away. Deep down she knows he will come back; He has to come back for their love. All she wants is for him to try to understand her. Just think for once, why would she do all this until and unless it's a matter of serious concern. Why would she decide to live her life without him who has become the reason of her survival.  Her buckles gave in and she fell to the floor crying her heart out. Her heart cried seeing the love of her life go away

Ten years, of a hidden secret, a secret unknown to the world. The only living soul who knew of it was she herself. Even if she had to die then so be it she thought she would rather take it to her grave than tell the world. Who had known that one day she would have to choose between love and revenge. A revenge, which has become the mission of her life and a love, which made her, forget her past. A past, which had the power to ruin her present and future. A power, that could remove every shred of dignity and respect she had on the society. All she could think was she cannot tell him. It would be like risking his life along with hers  On the other hand, Frank was walking down the road going down the memory lane to the best days of his life when he had married his beautiful and stunning bride Geisha Rhodes the brightest, beautiful, smart, and sophisticated girl in a delicate stature. He had liked her from the day he had seen her in his best friend's wedding day and right then he had fallen deeply in love with her glittering blue-green eyes and his biggest weakness those magically deep dimples.  It had been 5 years since they became one. Since, they gave their relationship a name. Since, then they were known by each other’s name. It has been 5 years of happily married life. One day out of nowhere, she was not there, when he entered a home waiting with a huge smile. From then till now he had no contact from her. Nothing that could prove if she is fine or what was the trouble. Now a day, every single moment passed by in his wondering which mistake of his has pushed her away. He tore at his brains but could find no answer He had tried to meet her and every time he tried, it was hopeless. No response came from tons of messages and calls. Something must have gone wrong. Frank was wondering what did he do wrong that could have possibly made her repulsive towards me. Just when he was thinking in the café, he got to see a glimpse of a red scarf. A scarf, which had more significance to him than anyone on earth did. A scarf made especially for her on her 20th birthday as a surprise gift from him.  He stopped thinking and had run without looking ahead to make swift turns to catch her before he loses her again and just in the nick of time before she could get into a taxi he had caught up with her but even that meeting had been a waste.


He thought its high time he started snooping around and getting a clear view of the problem. May be he could find a solution to all of it, And their life would get back to normal. 


One thing he was sure about is that he could not live without her Will he be able to get to know the secret or not?... 



© 2014 Cerise


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Cerise
Tell me freely what you think about my piece...its a try..

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Sky
I think it's a great theme..you will do well..keep going! :_)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
hmm needs a little polishing here and there but so far it is good. In my opinion I think chapters should be a little longer with more detail and such, but it's a good try.

Good Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
Nice try dear :) Must keep improving with time :)

Smiles :)
Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

I know writing Chapters/Story is not your forte, But you are perfect poet :)
Still you will im.. read more
Cerise

11 Years Ago

Aww..Thank you again..your words meant a lot...this is my first try.....well anyone can be a poet i .. read more
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Is there not any dialogue? Plus, is this a summary of the whole chapter? More interaction between the two characters would be nice. I like where the story is heading. The would be husband feeling like he was kept out of the loop and pushed away begins to think it was something he did. Keep at it Fancy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

there are dialogues...i had done a prologue for this..where they meet but she doesn't tell him her p.. read more
The prose carries a thumping and then ... and then ... and it moves to capture the attention of the reader and chain it to the reasons that are simple and at the same time bewildering. Its the bewilderment that draws the lover back to revenge and lose the very thing sought for. A promising start.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

you..:)
Even when kept secret, secrets have a way of toying with one's conscience, I can't wait to read the next chapter, this secret she has got me curious.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
Nice start. I am just disturbed by the speaker's point of view...at the start it's on the first person, then at the 5the paragraph (Frank wondered what did he do wrong that could have possibly made her repulsive towards me)...but the rest are on the third person. But in general, it's still a good start of a good concept which now everyone awaits for...
Good job!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you ..:)
A fine start. like the scarf motiv in the middle ! will follow this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
Very well written. Maybe that scarf was a gift from a secret lover. An affair in the making perhaps. Only time will tell as the story unfolds. Great write. An enjoyable read. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you...it meant a lot..:)
You have the making of a good story...first drafts are always rough but you are on your way. A sugestion is if you start the begining where Frank comes home and finds her missing. Just a thought.....I personaly am one for action in my stories but everyone is different. You need to either tell the story in third person or first person. Creating plots,characters and scenes is such a fun thing to do you get to create your own world.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Aww..Thank you so much....it was very sweet of you to say such wonderful things....i shall look out .. read more

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