Laissez Faire

Sometimes all you want is people to leave u alone so taht you can have few minutes of peace and relaxation.

Sometimes I wish I were all alone

With no one to irritate, message or phone

Just leave me to myself

Try to understand my agony

Try and learn to be empathetic

Life cannot go without being sympathetic

 

I wish my biggest wish

To be alone and peaceful

A wish to relax and breathe

A wish to be cheerful

A wish to delete the most awful

My head aches with all the pain

Stop hurting because you will not gain

 

Is it too much to ask

Is it such a difficult task?

For once, I beg you to let go

Give me the time for thoughts of troubles to flow

Let the train of thoughts come to a standstill

What I ask may be hard to kill

I know there is no thrill

 

I know I am a retard

But u don’t have to discard

Just let me go and goodness will return

Keeping me tight will make me burn 

Let me fly high...it is an important lesson to learn...

 

Author's Note

laissez faire means To let go

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You have to try free verse! You have a natural flow which you beat to death with the cudgel of 'forced' rhyme.

[quinfinn]

we all need our space. even when we deeply love someone there are some boundaries love cannot transgress. this is well written and speaks to me in a language i fully understand. breathing room is a necessary hiatus from the rigors of keeping up appearances and playing to the whims and desires of others. sometimes we just want to be alone, to work out our own thoughts and feelings. awesome write!

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)..it is very sweet of u to be so understanding..:)

[Jack...]

Very soothing and calming was this piece.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Mary E Green]

Can very much relate....many of us give so much of ourselves but it is just as important to give back to yourself- you must care for yourself as you would a dear friend....

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Dee Okolotowicz]

As I read your poem I thought, "I know exactly what you mean." I've felt this way many times before. Laissez Faire...good choice "let" me be. Good work. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Holly Mason]

peace and solitude they do go together well
this flows so nicely it was a pleasure to read
thank you for sharing

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Frieda P]

You're coming through loud and clear with this one! We all need solitude at times, this took me on a trip into that mindset, sounds like a good plan! Good read...

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, amazing write...

[sithlordjp]

Really good! Got curious about about the title, and I took a wonderful journey into your words, your word. I know exactly what you are expressing, we do feel the need to "laissez faire" every once in a while. I love the last stanza, the rythym and rhymes are strong. Merci de partager avec nous!

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)