Laissez Faire

Sometimes all you want is people to leave u alone so taht you can have few minutes of peace and relaxation.

Sometimes I wish I were all alone

With no one to irritate, message or phone

Just leave me to myself

Try to understand my agony

Try and learn to be empathetic

Life cannot go without being sympathetic

 

I wish my biggest wish

To be alone and peaceful

A wish to relax and breathe

A wish to be cheerful

A wish to delete the most awful

My head aches with all the pain

Stop hurting because you will not gain

 

Is it too much to ask

Is it such a difficult task?

For once, I beg you to let go

Give me the time for thoughts of troubles to flow

Let the train of thoughts come to a standstill

What I ask may be hard to kill

I know there is no thrill

 

I know I am a retard

But u don’t have to discard

Just let me go and goodness will return

Keeping me tight will make me burn 

Let me fly high...it is an important lesson to learn...

 

Author's Note

laissez faire means To let go

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

You're not a retard for wanting to be alone. I know this feeling. Sometimes people forget how preoccupied one is. Perhaps they have much less on their plates.

[Cerise]

Awww..Thank you for being understanding.....

[Tomi]

We all have those moments when solitude is Golden.. Lovely write. Thank you for sharing

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Subrat]

LET GO...a very big and vast meaning phrase. Well...well...it is as usual superb.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Very interesting:) We all find we have times when it's hard to let go bc someone else won't let go or just won't leave you alone. This is a very good description of that:) Great work:)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Your very welcome:)

[Joan*Eckhart]

You've perfectly expressed your desire to be left in peace here. I know how that feels.

[Cerise]

Thank you for being understanding..:)

[marie]

wonderful!!:) love it, you have voiced one of my many wishes here!! a time where no one needs you, a time of rest...of course..in that time i will probably just sleep!!

[Cerise]

awww..Thank you..:)...lolz..i tnk even i would sleep...

[marie]

Lol anyone Would its an exhausting world out there:)lol

[Cerise]

heheh..true...

[marie]

Very:)

[Luna Kusan]

This is...A-Amazing and so true

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Nick.B]

Great poem, with a beautiful imaginary attached to it, great job

[Cerise]

Thank you for wonderful words..:)

[Buddhistboy73]

Even though this poem feels a little "bumpy" in some of the stanzas with the rhyming, I enjoyed the sentiments....we all need that place of sanctuary to escape to when we want to rejuvenate our inner beauty and energy.....you do a good job of describing the frustrations that many of us experience....
BB

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Lino Rie]

What a poem. The word use is incredible.

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)