Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Cerise
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A life of two people entwined together with secrets hidden in the past. Will love be able to conquer over the dark truth.

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Frank pulled her to him and looked deep in her eyes and said, "Why do you do this when it troubles you as much as it troubles me. Why do you run away from me?"

Geisha pulled away, unable to answer.

As is he could not bear to be apart from her, Frank reached out desperately for Geisha again and pleaded, "What is it that keeps you away from me? What is tormenting you my love? You do not have to fight this battle alone. Tell me and I promise I will see to the problem. Don’t you have feelings for me anymore? Is that it? "


Frank felt as if tons of questions were bubbling within him and that this may well be his last chance.Geisha knew that her time was up. If she stayed a minute more she would give in and would never let go. She looked away and said one single word that crushed his heart to pieces. She said

" Yes"
A tear slid down her peach like cheeks like a pearl filled with pain. It tore at her heart, but she knew she had to be strong. Frank looked deep into her eyes once more, as if he was searching for the lost love within her, one last time. Like an image, he wished to capture forever in his mind. Then he turned and walked away without a backward glance.



© 2013 Cerise


Author's Note

Cerise
It is my first try let me know what you felt..:)..Thank you

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Featured Review

Your words leave me wanting to know what secrets they hold. You have injected just enough emotion and facts to make us ask!
It is very good, and I look forward to reading more!! My favorite line:

A tear slid down her peach like cheeks like a pearl filled with pain. It tore at her heart, but she knew she had to be strong...lovely imagery!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful words...:)



Reviews

This is very interesting so far. I like the words you use to describe what is happening and you make the reader feel and almost see what is happening as if they were right there watching what is happening between Geisha and Frank. Very good!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cerise

10 Years Ago

Thank you for motivating me truly glad....hopefully i will find time to write it..:)
Interesting and sweet too. Would love to be with this till the end.

Best Wishes

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear..:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Awww it makes me feel sosad, because geisha was sad about the wy she felt. Frank got angry. And the longing. Very heart felt. Well done!!!! :) Keep writing! !!!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear..:)
Good job. :) I like where this is going...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aehr

11 Years Ago

it was superb! :) Lets meet up the next time I go! :)
Cerise

11 Years Ago

aww..suree....:)..am glad u had fun
Aehr

11 Years Ago

I sure did!
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U should really write the continuation of this, I would totally read it! 100/100 Ur one little step from a great book!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Awww..Thank you dear..:)
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11 Years Ago

Ur welcome! ^.^
You're moving in the right direction with your piece. This could become a moving love story.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
`more more more i feel as though i want more :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Aww...Thank you..i will write soon and post it..:)
A good start...but the guy was bit dumb to believe her when she was so sad...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

he knew she was fighting within herself..but he didnt know the reason...u will get to know more in t.. read more
Perfectly a girl's emotion woven perfectly in a writing piece. Unless you feel it, you cannt write it. So, great work. Wish i could write like this too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

heheh..stop joking..i noe its horrible and thr r tons of mistakes...bt am glad i wrote sumtng atleas.. read more
Subrat

11 Years Ago

I will be waiting.
Cerise

11 Years Ago

heheh..yeash boss...i will c wen i cn find tym..
This was a great beginning to what I suspect could be a wonderful story. I loved the line, "A tear slid down her peach like cheeks like a pearl filled with pain." It was a sad yet pretty description.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cerise

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

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