THE KISS OF LIFE

A story of two people and the way destiny plays its games

 

Nights rose with gleaming starlight

Days begun from zenith height

The sun dazzled bright showing its rays

The moon so bright shining unfazed its way

Love had started roaming the earth

Before time could pass, Hate showed its worth

A Boy was born with riches and wonders

And a Girl lived On ragged clothes

Similar was the Nature of their birth

And similar would be the way they die

Moved from time To time,

One in search of Survival another for Gain

Changed into an Adult with looks and brain

He became Gentlemen and Lady she became

Destiny played It's naughty tricks once again

Sparks ignited, When their gazes held

Staring deep searching into the soul

Unknown about the Tortures of life

They gave way in Love unknown to the spice

And like always just when everything was calm

Life gave a Tumble and whoop came a storm

Out came the Truth, beggar she was

Hurt and betrayal came with the flaws

Desperate to move, They separated their ways

Ages passed when Life tried a spell

In front they Stood, It was worse than hell

The past and Present rotated around

Hell broke loose, Aura of happiness abound

Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain

After few efforts The hero forgave

Love ruled them Once again

Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice

Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE.....

Author's Note

Just something came out of know where..it was more like the world started with the start of night and day...and how love and truth came..how men nd women came into being..and a love story between them born..the way destiny plays its game...the way hurt,betrayal and pain rules life..And whatever happens in the end the soul mate would help you live through it..:)

Reviews

[quinfinn]

although it should be....sometimes love just isn't enough. i think we have become jaded to greed and comforts and specialized living and that detracts from the basis of a loving relationship. the human race has its priorities mixed up and has forgotten some of the most important values. this write is awesome. it fully orchestrates the circle of life and the karmic wheel...well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words...what you said is true..i guess we all take it for granted...

[quinfinn]

a pleasure to read....you're welcome

[Dayran]

It sounds a little like getting hands on with most things we come across. It is that way with most things isn't it?

[Cerise]

true..:)

[gombeggar]

good ideas...but the writing seems a little forced...maybe a 2nd draft

[Baby Ricochet]

And the Lord said "what in the hell is that damn thing " good poem. Thank you for letting a low brow like BR read it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok no matter where it ca me from nice write. That captures the dilemma of many relationships

[kublakhan27]

You definitely have a deep understanding of love's ups and downs...great piece :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I know no other way to say this other than this is a cartouche filled with vivid images, painted in the palette of words by an inspired mind that contemplates, perhaps both consciously and unconsciously the nature of a particular type of existence in their place of being. Whew! Sorry, that was long-winded but it is the reflection in the water, a slight ripple across the surface. Well done, my joyous friend.

[Cerise]

you are amazing with your words..Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Krista Weiss]

Awww!! Amazing job!! Love this so much! :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[KAOlmsted]

Nice job. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Frieda P]

The old tale of the girl from the wrong side of the tracks, you told it with a different twist and so elegantly I might add. Sounds like kismet, feels like a wonderful fairy tale, with a happy ending. Lovely read.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Lover Of Words]

Very good!!!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome