THE KISS OF LIFE

A story of two people and the way destiny plays its games

 

Nights rose with gleaming starlight

Days begun from zenith height

The sun dazzled bright showing its rays

The moon so bright shining unfazed its way

Love had started roaming the earth

Before time could pass, Hate showed its worth

A Boy was born with riches and wonders

And a Girl lived On ragged clothes

Similar was the Nature of their birth

And similar would be the way they die

Moved from time To time,

One in search of Survival another for Gain

Changed into an Adult with looks and brain

He became Gentlemen and Lady she became

Destiny played It's naughty tricks once again

Sparks ignited, When their gazes held

Staring deep searching into the soul

Unknown about the Tortures of life

They gave way in Love unknown to the spice

And like always just when everything was calm

Life gave a Tumble and whoop came a storm

Out came the Truth, beggar she was

Hurt and betrayal came with the flaws

Desperate to move, They separated their ways

Ages passed when Life tried a spell

In front they Stood, It was worse than hell

The past and Present rotated around

Hell broke loose, Aura of happiness abound

Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain

After few efforts The hero forgave

Love ruled them Once again

Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice

Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE.....

Author's Note

Just something came out of know where..it was more like the world started with the start of night and day...and how love and truth came..how men nd women came into being..and a love story between them born..the way destiny plays its game...the way hurt,betrayal and pain rules life..And whatever happens in the end the soul mate would help you live through it..:)

Reviews

[quinfinn]

although it should be....sometimes love just isn't enough. i think we have become jaded to greed and comforts and specialized living and that detracts from the basis of a loving relationship. the human race has its priorities mixed up and has forgotten some of the most important values. this write is awesome. it fully orchestrates the circle of life and the karmic wheel...well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words...what you said is true..i guess we all take it for granted...

[quinfinn]

a pleasure to read....you're welcome

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I completely and totally love this and I definately agree!!!!!!!!:) Sorry, I just love the idea of love and you've captured the importance of it here perfectly!!!!!!!! Wonderful:)

[Cerise]

hehe..Thank you so much..am glad u liked it..u dont have to be sorry for anythng..:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Well, I was afraid I was getting a little over exited about it.. I do that sometimes:) It really is a wonderful poem:)

[Katie Flores]

it reminded me of Cinderella, nice way of really making it romantic and deeper than it was :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Stanley Wilson]

awesome love story

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

BeAutifully penned....loved it

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Helen Crutchett]

A beautiful write! Much enjoyed this flowing love story.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww. Life is sweet and this was definitely a very sweet poem. I enjoyed it.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[RachelReaper]

"Life is sweet with a seasoning of spice" I love that line, because I think its so true. I think spice represents the risk, and really,
"What's life without a little risk"- quote from Sirius Black in the Harry Potter series. Couldn't resist being a HP fan there, that's what that line reminded me of. Great write!

[Cerise]

lolz...Thank you..:)

[Gray Witch]

Love the ending which, for me, sums it all up nicely:

"Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice
Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE....."

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem brought me in and held my attention to the last word.
"In front they Stood, It was worse than hell
The past and Present rotated around
Hell broke loose, Aura of happiness abound
Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry. The above lines were my favorite.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Sky]

This is a great piece! I love the style of your poem/story, creatively written. This is going in my favs for sure!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)