THE KISS OF LIFE

A story of two people and the way destiny plays its games

 

Nights rose with gleaming starlight

Days begun from zenith height

The sun dazzled bright showing its rays

The moon so bright shining unfazed its way

Love had started roaming the earth

Before time could pass, Hate showed its worth

A Boy was born with riches and wonders

And a Girl lived On ragged clothes

Similar was the Nature of their birth

And similar would be the way they die

Moved from time To time,

One in search of Survival another for Gain

Changed into an Adult with looks and brain

He became Gentlemen and Lady she became

Destiny played It's naughty tricks once again

Sparks ignited, When their gazes held

Staring deep searching into the soul

Unknown about the Tortures of life

They gave way in Love unknown to the spice

And like always just when everything was calm

Life gave a Tumble and whoop came a storm

Out came the Truth, beggar she was

Hurt and betrayal came with the flaws

Desperate to move, They separated their ways

Ages passed when Life tried a spell

In front they Stood, It was worse than hell

The past and Present rotated around

Hell broke loose, Aura of happiness abound

Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain

After few efforts The hero forgave

Love ruled them Once again

Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice

Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE.....

Author's Note

Just something came out of know where..it was more like the world started with the start of night and day...and how love and truth came..how men nd women came into being..and a love story between them born..the way destiny plays its game...the way hurt,betrayal and pain rules life..And whatever happens in the end the soul mate would help you live through it..:)

Reviews

[quinfinn]

although it should be....sometimes love just isn't enough. i think we have become jaded to greed and comforts and specialized living and that detracts from the basis of a loving relationship. the human race has its priorities mixed up and has forgotten some of the most important values. this write is awesome. it fully orchestrates the circle of life and the karmic wheel...well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words...what you said is true..i guess we all take it for granted...

[quinfinn]

a pleasure to read....you're welcome

[Dr. Wood ?]

well you did a brilliant job with this,,,,,,,One of your best to date I would say....It flowed smoothly and you covered 2 lifetimes in such a short space ...well done

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words sir..:)..am glad you liked it

[Blue Lotus]

Love the flow of this poem.. well done

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Jack...]

Wow, this was stunning. Like a fairytale, two opposites, fall in love, seperate and then realize they can not live without each other. This was beautiful.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Jack...]

You are very welcome

[Acer]

Right or wrong,
good or bad,
nice or wise,
i don't know, but the word's are so powerful, i loved your poem overall.
The tittle is that what i loved much.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Acer]

My pleasure, i said truth. I loved your word's indeed.

[Cerise]

Gudness!! you flatter me far too much but am grateful to u for such wonderful words..:)

[Acer]

My pleasure, i appreciate it.

[Cerise]

:)

[K.G]

confuseing. . .yet not confuseing. . . .i really like your style, its very interesting to read and its so, you! keeo it up love :3

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[K.G]

ur wellcome love ^.^

[WingsToFly]

really nice

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Beautiful written words. I love the concept of the Adam and Eve underlying story.

[Cerise]

Thank you my lady for your wonderful words..am glad u liked it..:)

[Natasha]

this was a nicely written poem, some great rhymes, flow, and story on top of it all. i really enjoyed the last two lines of the poem, i think it ended the poem nicely and it was almost witty :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words.:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

when I was reading it in my head, it sounded like rap lyrics. Which isn't a bad thing! It gave the words attitude in my mind and I enjoyed it so much more. Very nicely done!

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)