THE KISS OF LIFE

A story of two people and the way destiny plays its games

 

Nights rose with gleaming starlight

Days begun from zenith height

The sun dazzled bright showing its rays

The moon so bright shining unfazed its way

Love had started roaming the earth

Before time could pass, Hate showed its worth

A Boy was born with riches and wonders

And a Girl lived On ragged clothes

Similar was the Nature of their birth

And similar would be the way they die

Moved from time To time,

One in search of Survival another for Gain

Changed into an Adult with looks and brain

He became Gentlemen and Lady she became

Destiny played It's naughty tricks once again

Sparks ignited, When their gazes held

Staring deep searching into the soul

Unknown about the Tortures of life

They gave way in Love unknown to the spice

And like always just when everything was calm

Life gave a Tumble and whoop came a storm

Out came the Truth, beggar she was

Hurt and betrayal came with the flaws

Desperate to move, They separated their ways

Ages passed when Life tried a spell

In front they Stood, It was worse than hell

The past and Present rotated around

Hell broke loose, Aura of happiness abound

Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain

After few efforts The hero forgave

Love ruled them Once again

Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice

Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE.....

Author's Note

Just something came out of know where..it was more like the world started with the start of night and day...and how love and truth came..how men nd women came into being..and a love story between them born..the way destiny plays its game...the way hurt,betrayal and pain rules life..And whatever happens in the end the soul mate would help you live through it..:)

Reviews

[quinfinn]

although it should be....sometimes love just isn't enough. i think we have become jaded to greed and comforts and specialized living and that detracts from the basis of a loving relationship. the human race has its priorities mixed up and has forgotten some of the most important values. this write is awesome. it fully orchestrates the circle of life and the karmic wheel...well done.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words...what you said is true..i guess we all take it for granted...

[quinfinn]

a pleasure to read....you're welcome

[AlyshaN]

I LOVE it
i have to read it again

[Cerise]

Awww..thank you so much...it meant alot..:)

[Onku Ghosh]

Wonderful ! A nice tale of love told beautifully.....Wish all love stories ended on a positive note like yours.

[Cerise]

thank you..:)

[Prritiy]

Forgiveness came Out with tears of pain
After few efforts The hero forgave
Love ruled them Once again
Life is sweet With a seasoning of spice
Only saved by THE KISS OF LIFE.....

you wrote a nice story in poetic way. wish all life stories ended like this. :)

[Cerise]

aww..Thank you dear..:)..well deep down somewhere we all wish for happy ending..but i guess onli sum r lucky enugh to hav it..

[Prritiy]

yes true.
you are welcome :)

[Shay]

wonderful, i love your wording and you ended it on a good impact. ties the entire poem together well, good job

[Cerise]

Thank you shay..:)

[minnie:)]

very good poem :)

[Cerise]

Thank you...:)

[carol burgess romance]

I can relate to this..as a young girl I fell in love with a handsome boy from "the wrong side of the tracks." Enjoyed your poem

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love knows no boundaries, so money is certainly no problem to overcome... love is also never easy but when we try it is worth it in the end.

Anyways, a wonderful poem and story.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Kaylor Mason]

This is really cool . . . life; there's nothing quite like it

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)