Rise of Heartbeat...Fear of an End

The fear of breakup and to be strong even after breakup.

Just when everything was going right

A gushing wind came so bright

Out of nowhere, you gave an atrocious fright....

 

Your exact words still linger in My heart

“I need to talk”

And talking till date has never been a good part...

 

Even though it was a last resort

You were my consort

Why can't we be unique?

You were antique...

 

Problems arise that is called life sweetheart

But I fear this one might actually break us apart

My heart tells me something is wrong

Hoping and praying what I feel is long gone...

 

Just when everything was going on it's way

Why did life had to come and screw my way

I wish you would just think twice

Because happiness comes with huge price

If the time has come for us to depart

I would even, if it would tear my heart...

 

If breaking apart is what you want

Then that is what you will get even if it will haunt

Relationships are not a chess game

To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign...

 

Life never goes as we planned

But remember one thing

Whatever happens, Happens for good

Even though it’s hard to be understood…

 

Author's Note

Temme how you feel

Reviews

[Aehr]

I can relate. :P

this is a very true poem. I love the rhyming.

P.S. = I'm in Dubai right now :)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you rhea....:)..omgg...u serious..woooow..Welcome to dubai....amazing weathr isnt it..:P....

[Aehr]

yep... i'm loving it! :) better than the chill of India right now :)

[Cerise]

lolz....so had fun roaming around...wer u thr for new year??....u must have seen the fireworks..

[Aehr]

yep, the fireworks were amazing! One of my dad's friends live in a building opposite to Burj Khalifa. We went there for new year's, and the scene was just amazing. I've never seen anything like it! :)

[Cerise]

ahahhah..i noeee..it was fabulous....glad to know you had good time..:)

[Aehr]

:) it really was

[Dr. Wood ?]

what happens happens....simple but true

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Dayran]

A jewel on a necklace is the centerpiece of the chain that we bring to express about ourselves. A necklace with pearls makes no such statement and we wonder what people mean by that. We try to tell them that they need a jewel and they to us to appreciate all pearls. It appears to me however, that it may be that way for us in all eternity.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your wonderful thoughts..:)

[Jordan's Back]

This is a Sad Heartbreaking tale, when one wants to leave and the other wants to try to make it work. Its a wonderful write.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[ms. barrie]

how i feel, s**t, this is amazingly profound! incredible, insightful (loss for words, sorry) imagery you captured in conveying dealing with, the feelings one has when relationships are the beginning of the end. brilliantly penned. great job. 100 to 100 :) *puts this in me pockets* - thanks for sharing!

[Cerise]

Aww...Thankyou so very much for your wonderful words dear...you were a great boost of motivation..Made my day..:)..I am glad you liked it..

[ms. barrie]

i did enjoy it but to be honest this was a hard read. as it reminds me of those feelings i had when i knew it was the beginning of the end of the last relationship i was in *for 18 years, almost two years ago*. that's why initial review on this was perhaps a bit exuberant, i had to pick my jaw off the floor. you're quite welcome. you have a way with words that cut right to the heart. looking forward to reading more of your writings :)

[Cerise]

Oh my gosh..i have no words...18yrs is hell of a time..wow...i am astonished..I am sorry for your loss..Thank you again..i hope u will find your soul mate soon...as I said in the end everything happens for good.. Dont worry love will find its way into your life soon..:)

[ms. barrie]

eh, s**t happens, then you eat a cupcake, watch LMN and eventually get a poem out of it, well i got two lol. life goes on, move four hours away, and just live a new life. writing's = my love. thanks for your very thoughtful words, keep writing :)

[Cerise]

hahahah..well said darling..truee..cupcake is de best solution :P...exactly..life doesnt stop..hehe....gudluck to you too..:)

[ms. barrie]

thank you, you too,, dear poet :)