Rise of Heartbeat...Fear of an End

The fear of breakup and to be strong even after breakup.

Just when everything was going right

A gushing wind came so bright

Out of nowhere, you gave an atrocious fright....

 

Your exact words still linger in My heart

“I need to talk”

And talking till date has never been a good part...

 

Even though it was a last resort

You were my consort

Why can't we be unique?

You were antique...

 

Problems arise that is called life sweetheart

But I fear this one might actually break us apart

My heart tells me something is wrong

Hoping and praying what I feel is long gone...

 

Just when everything was going on it's way

Why did life had to come and screw my way

I wish you would just think twice

Because happiness comes with huge price

If the time has come for us to depart

I would even, if it would tear my heart...

 

If breaking apart is what you want

Then that is what you will get even if it will haunt

Relationships are not a chess game

To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign...

 

Life never goes as we planned

But remember one thing

Whatever happens, Happens for good

Even though it’s hard to be understood…

 

Author's Note

Temme how you feel

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I felt your emotional stress through this poem, and heartbreak, it made me feel it, too.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[lee von cleef]

Good write, but philosophically I disagree, Evil is real.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your opinion..:)

[DrD]

You're quite right, of course. There is reason to be found in each event and it's our job to find it and move on with life. You captured the feelings of apprehension and fear quite well and gave us an enjoyable read.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[KAOlmsted]

Nice work. Break ups are harsh. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Cerise]

Thank you :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Great job

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[gombeggar]

perhaps a '?' after the line 'Why can't we be unique'

good expression here, good wording...there are really no heart cards in a game of chess afterall unless u love like war

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..well said..:)

[Felicity's Eve]

Very well thought out and perfectly written. I feel a wave of...bittersweet resulting from the last paragraph. :,)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[marie]

lovely piece, i like the way you have portrayed the emotions in this thank you for sharing

[Cerise]

Thank you for such wonderful words..:)

[marie]

no prob its my pleasure:)

[Lonely Islander]

I found the whole poem really inspirational, especially the last paragraph... A very well penned poem:-):-):-D.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Frieda P]

Oh, that nasty telling wind....

'Relationships are not a chess game
To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign'

Love this line, it says a lot about relationships rise and fall.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)