Rise of Heartbeat...Fear of an End

The fear of breakup and to be strong even after breakup.

Just when everything was going right

A gushing wind came so bright

Out of nowhere, you gave an atrocious fright....

 

Your exact words still linger in My heart

“I need to talk”

And talking till date has never been a good part...

 

Even though it was a last resort

You were my consort

Why can't we be unique?

You were antique...

 

Problems arise that is called life sweetheart

But I fear this one might actually break us apart

My heart tells me something is wrong

Hoping and praying what I feel is long gone...

 

Just when everything was going on it's way

Why did life had to come and screw my way

I wish you would just think twice

Because happiness comes with huge price

If the time has come for us to depart

I would even, if it would tear my heart...

 

If breaking apart is what you want

Then that is what you will get even if it will haunt

Relationships are not a chess game

To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign...

 

Life never goes as we planned

But remember one thing

Whatever happens, Happens for good

Even though it’s hard to be understood…

 

Author's Note

Temme how you feel

Reviews

[WingsToFly]

nice write

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Lover Of Words]

This is a very good write. Coming from my point of veiw this reminds me so much of how i would handle a break up I would write about it instead of letting others know and life surely doesnt go as we planned and you made it very clear Very good write my new friend

[Cerise]

Aww....Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[kimmy]

I liked this poem very much, I have to say you are right when you hear or are the one to say "we need to talk" that is such a bad sign and usually means things are not the way we thought and our relationship is coming to an end. I related to this poem in many ways, with the we need to talk and how about relationships are not a chess game, though people do play to win. I don't know, I liked this poem it was so real and see how things can change so fast, maybe you knew or maybe you didn't. Good job hun:)

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you so much for such wonderful words..Am glad you liked it..:)

[kimmy]

You are very welcome :)

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Amazing poem!! I can definitely relate to this!! :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Tarry Franck]

If breaking apart is what you want
Then that is what you will get even if it will haunt
Relationships are not a chess game
To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign...


Great work on the whole poem but this stanza stood out for me - Just love it.

[Cerise]

Thank you fro your wonderful opinion..:)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I like the double entendre at the end of the next-to-last line; intentional or otherwise. It adds a hopeful finality to the poem that lightly deflates the tension that builds from the beginning. Nice!

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful opinion..:)

[quinfinn]

"relationships are not a chess game"...profound. i like the way you have encapsulated and compartmentalised many aspects of a relationship herein. the simple fact is, and this is only my opinion, if your relationship does not flow, unaided, like good poetry it is in fact...nothing more than a chess game , and in chess there can be only one winner. clever write.

[Cerise]

Thank you fro your wonderful opinion..:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

It felt like you had to force the rhyme in some of the stanzas. It just didn't sound natural when I was reading it out loud. I mean no offense, I like this poem very much. (:
"Relationships are not a chess game
To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign..."
Beautifully written. ^Best lines of the poem, I think.

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you for being honest..:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

You're welcome. Thank you for sharing (:

[Ahmad Cox]

So beautiful and honest at the same time. I really appreciated this one.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[emmy bon]

nice write, full of emotions...

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)