Rise of Heartbeat...Fear of an End

The fear of breakup and to be strong even after breakup.

Just when everything was going right

A gushing wind came so bright

Out of nowhere, you gave an atrocious fright....

 

Your exact words still linger in My heart

“I need to talk”

And talking till date has never been a good part...

 

Even though it was a last resort

You were my consort

Why can't we be unique?

You were antique...

 

Problems arise that is called life sweetheart

But I fear this one might actually break us apart

My heart tells me something is wrong

Hoping and praying what I feel is long gone...

 

Just when everything was going on it's way

Why did life had to come and screw my way

I wish you would just think twice

Because happiness comes with huge price

If the time has come for us to depart

I would even, if it would tear my heart...

 

If breaking apart is what you want

Then that is what you will get even if it will haunt

Relationships are not a chess game

To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign...

 

Life never goes as we planned

But remember one thing

Whatever happens, Happens for good

Even though it’s hard to be understood…

 

Author's Note

Temme how you feel

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

After read it out, who's heartbeat's gonna fast...lol,
this's pretty nice way to write, thinkin' on this tittlte's great...well, appropriate thoughts. well, it's nice piece, nice ink n moreover nice "HEARTBEAT".

[Cerise]

lol..thank you....:)

[B-poet]

This is fantastic. It should be published on your behalf as well. Very well written and heartfelt from start to finish. Great written eloquence. Nice work. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderful words...:)

[Jack...]

Very lovely and truthful and sad. Indeed, all too often life gets in the way of what we think is real, though as you have stated, the good will come whether we understand it or not.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words sir..:)

[Shay]

really good, i like it alot

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Acer]

Another great poem.

[Cerise]

Thank you once again..:)

[Acer]

My pleasure twice again...:-'')

[Cerise]

:)

[Barbara Walker]

true emotion in this piece. ...who gets the queen and who loses the reign, yeah, it's not a chess game. Can be a lot of mind games, tho.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[K.G]

this is very well written, and i am srry for late replys.. . .ive been kinda booked. . . .and haveing no internet sucks. .. . . .but back to ur poem, im very speechless with how you written this, job well done my friend!

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you..its completely alright..u replied that is enough...i understand livign without internet has becum near to impossible..Thankyou for your wonderful words..:)

[K.G]

ur wellcome love :3 and yay!

[Ayvid N]

Exactly my feelings on the subject. As you concluded it is for the best but thats hard to understand.

A great poem on heartbreak.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)