Rise of Heartbeat...Fear of an End

The fear of breakup and to be strong even after breakup.

Just when everything was going right

A gushing wind came so bright

Out of nowhere, you gave an atrocious fright....

 

Your exact words still linger in My heart

“I need to talk”

And talking till date has never been a good part...

 

Even though it was a last resort

You were my consort

Why can't we be unique?

You were antique...

 

Problems arise that is called life sweetheart

But I fear this one might actually break us apart

My heart tells me something is wrong

Hoping and praying what I feel is long gone...

 

Just when everything was going on it's way

Why did life had to come and screw my way

I wish you would just think twice

Because happiness comes with huge price

If the time has come for us to depart

I would even, if it would tear my heart...

 

If breaking apart is what you want

Then that is what you will get even if it will haunt

Relationships are not a chess game

To see who gets the queen and who loses the reign...

 

Life never goes as we planned

But remember one thing

Whatever happens, Happens for good

Even though it’s hard to be understood…

 

Author's Note

Temme how you feel

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Everything has its time to build, and its time to fade, and thus to build again renewed. Your poem inspired me to write this gift poem for you:

Love is Patient

Loss won’t stand forever.
Love too has its time.
Somewhere short of Never
matching notes must chime.

[Cerise]

Awww..thank you so much for such wonderful gift of words...truly appreciate it..well said..:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Because happiness comes with huge price
If the time has come for us to depart
I would even, if it would tear my heart..."

I feel joy and sadness when reading your wonderful work...:)...............

[Cerise]

Thank you....

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome....

[Mark]

Those four words can shivers up a guy's spine. Kind of a lengthy poem, but I can relate to it that's fer sure.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your thoughts.....:)

[Onku Ghosh]

"Relationship are not a chess game/ to see who gets the queen who loses the reign.''.....Very beautifully expressed and it is so true.Lovely write!!!!

[Cerise]

thank you..:)

[Onku Ghosh]

YOU are welcome

[Brianna Brie]

This poem tugs at my heart strings. You expressed yourself well!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Celtic]

ohh wow, this's the poem i;ve read out after a long time..this's really a great poem..i'm again givin' you my review...
you've memorized some memory when i was here a few months ago...
lovely write...100/100 this time because this's great stuff n i read out after a long time again.

[Cerise]

aww..Thank you for your kind review..:)

[Celtic]

it's totally my n only my pleasure ...lol :)

[Cerise]

:)

[barricade]

Beautifully penned...so true and so relate able...great work :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Joan*Eckhart]

This was wonderful. Well written and expressed.

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)