A DISCARDED JEWEL

A poem on how a child feels after being abandoned by her mother..Tons of questions with no one to answer...

There are days, when I wonder

Wonder where you are

Wonder where you went

Leaving me alone to defend

 

I hope you would come, every single day

A day is not easy to pass by,

I wish you would just come and say

Oh! My cupcake come here, don't worry

I know am late, I am so very sorry

When mama is here nothing to fear

My teddy bear, you are my dear

 

I wish you were there, In my childhood

Lulling me to a treacle chocolaty dream

A hope that you would buy me new toys

When, I did better than I could fare

The hope still throbbing in my heart,

Even after those precious years apart.

     

I wish you were here to comfort

Saying darling love, but never hate

The agony in my heart a part of me

Reminding me of a banshee

Why mama, Did you leave such everlasting pain

With no one to lean on to, or anything to gain

 

Oh Mama! What was your reason

To dump your newborn child

Oh Mama! why could you not take me along

Was, I a trouble even though so small?

How I wish you were here with me today

We could have stayed together

Forgiving each other, No need to betray

 

Today, I have every thing in my life

Except, a sense of completeness

A solitude resting deep in my heart

Reminding me of a wandering soul

That has neither pulse, nor a beating heart

No tears of blood, or happiness to depart

My wish for you is still the same

May you come home, safely putting an end

To this Heart-wrenching game

 

 

Author's Note

PLese let knoe know what you think of it..Thankyou

Reviews

[gombeggar]

some little grammatical and punctuation errors...but it reads very well and has a good strong feel to it

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[dunnia]

Everlasting pain.....forgiving each other...a sense of completeness...must i say wow i love your choice of words..this was written very nicely

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your wonderful words..:)

[dunnia]

Your very welcome :)

[luviva]

ohhh this is so sad en emotially gripping. i felt for you all through nice writting and its agreat message to mothers hope she comes back to you safe

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[lee von cleef]

emotion born in the womb,so much we drop,forgetting how we feel is absorbed by the sponge of a child ,the innocent mind ,forced to grow live with the voids placed in our soul before we were born.

[Cerise]

Very well said..thankyou for your opinion..:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Very beautifully empathetic and powerful write. Its a subject that not a lot of people tackle but you did it very graceful and you did it very well.

[Cerise]

Thankyou your words made my day..:)

[quinfinn]

whether contrived or not, this is a tragic write. it exudes the pangs of maternal rejection brought about by a life separated by emotional distance. gritty and real while succinct and heart rendering. it has a free form prose which seems to merit the effort. well done.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your kind words..:)