A DISCARDED JEWEL

A poem on how a child feels after being abandoned by her mother..Tons of questions with no one to answer...

There are days, when I wonder

Wonder where you are

Wonder where you went

Leaving me alone to defend

 

I hope you would come, every single day

A day is not easy to pass by,

I wish you would just come and say

Oh! My cupcake come here, don't worry

I know am late, I am so very sorry

When mama is here nothing to fear

My teddy bear, you are my dear

 

I wish you were there, In my childhood

Lulling me to a treacle chocolaty dream

A hope that you would buy me new toys

When, I did better than I could fare

The hope still throbbing in my heart,

Even after those precious years apart.

     

I wish you were here to comfort

Saying darling love, but never hate

The agony in my heart a part of me

Reminding me of a banshee

Why mama, Did you leave such everlasting pain

With no one to lean on to, or anything to gain

 

Oh Mama! What was your reason

To dump your newborn child

Oh Mama! why could you not take me along

Was, I a trouble even though so small?

How I wish you were here with me today

We could have stayed together

Forgiving each other, No need to betray

 

Today, I have every thing in my life

Except, a sense of completeness

A solitude resting deep in my heart

Reminding me of a wandering soul

That has neither pulse, nor a beating heart

No tears of blood, or happiness to depart

My wish for you is still the same

May you come home, safely putting an end

To this Heart-wrenching game

 

 

Author's Note

PLese let knoe know what you think of it..Thankyou

Reviews

[Kelsey]

This is so powerful, and so beautifully written. Truly touching. Lovely job. :)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your kind words..:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

This was so sweet and heart-melting

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your kind words..:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok that did it. You played my emotions in a lovely but sad poem that made me cry!

[Cerise]

Thank you for such touching words..:)

[Dayran]

A child speaking of a lost childhood has recovered much ground compared to an adult speaking of it in anger. The voice of a child resonates in the universe ... its hard to resist.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your thoughts..:)..well said

[Shreyas Tripathy]

It feels so bad to feel this way. Almost unimaginable... A childhood without mother...
Very beautifully written, loved it !

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Shreyas Tripathy]

You're welcome!

[Felicity's Eve]

Wow. It's so emotional and articulate! I love it! :)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you..:)

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[emmy bon]

very emotional poem, well written and well done

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Violet Dreams...]

Excellent write! Fati. i felt your anger, and cried with the words of your write.
This is really a well penned write.

[Cerise]

Awwww..Thank you so much for such wonderful words, truly made my day..:)

[Violet Dreams...]

welcome

[DrD]

I can only say that I hope this is not a true life experience writing. And if it isn't, then you have still captured the spiritual aloneness of a child feeling abandonment and a sense of not being worthy. It is an emotion trip through this writing and that's what good writing does. A very nice job.

[Cerise]

Thankfully I have parents who love me alot...:).Thank you fro your kind words sir..:)