A DISCARDED JEWEL

A poem on how a child feels after being abandoned by her mother..Tons of questions with no one to answer...

There are days, when I wonder

Wonder where you are

Wonder where you went

Leaving me alone to defend

 

I hope you would come, every single day

A day is not easy to pass by,

I wish you would just come and say

Oh! My cupcake come here, don't worry

I know am late, I am so very sorry

When mama is here nothing to fear

My teddy bear, you are my dear

 

I wish you were there, In my childhood

Lulling me to a treacle chocolaty dream

A hope that you would buy me new toys

When, I did better than I could fare

The hope still throbbing in my heart,

Even after those precious years apart.

     

I wish you were here to comfort

Saying darling love, but never hate

The agony in my heart a part of me

Reminding me of a banshee

Why mama, Did you leave such everlasting pain

With no one to lean on to, or anything to gain

 

Oh Mama! What was your reason

To dump your newborn child

Oh Mama! why could you not take me along

Was, I a trouble even though so small?

How I wish you were here with me today

We could have stayed together

Forgiving each other, No need to betray

 

Today, I have every thing in my life

Except, a sense of completeness

A solitude resting deep in my heart

Reminding me of a wandering soul

That has neither pulse, nor a beating heart

No tears of blood, or happiness to depart

My wish for you is still the same

May you come home, safely putting an end

To this Heart-wrenching game

 

 

Author's Note

PLese let knoe know what you think of it..Thankyou

Reviews

[Mark]

So sad. I can't imagine what it would be like to be left as a child. I hope you can find peace about this.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[SilentScreamingTears]

This is very well written! While I have never been physically abandoned by my mother, I have been emotionally abused and discarded by her, so in a way I can understand (a small amount of) your pain.

[Cerise]

Awww..Thank you...:)

[Acer]

I wish you were here to comfort
Saying darling love, but never hate
The agony in my heart a part of me
Reminding me of a banshee
Why mama, Did you leave such everlasting pain
With no one to lean on to, or anything to gain
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loved it indeed. Again, i've seen sth new from here. well written.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words sir,..:)

[Acer]

ok, Ma''am :*)

[Cerise]

hehe..:)

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[Cerise]

hahahhaha...gudness....relax..:P

[Acer]

Cool

[Jack...]

So very sad, but beautifully written. There will always be crosses to bear I assume in every life, it how we carry those burdens that makes us who we are. This was lovely.

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur kind words...am glad you liked it sir..:)

[Jack...]

Anytime

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I love it. Idk why but while reading it I was recalling the Jerry Sherwood story in my mind.

[Cerise]

Aww..thank you for your kind words..:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime. :)

[Frieda P]

Like a sharp knife to the heart, as a mother I feel this in my bones. Extremely emotional read, hard to accept the reasoning behind this but sometimes life gets in the way unfortunately. I have a good friend that is on the search for her mother, it's a source for much pain in her life, I hear you loud and clear. Very heart wrenching read.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much my lady..am glad u liked it..:)..i hope ur friend gets to meet her mother soon..:)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, yes, me too...she doesn't have much to go on as it was a closed adoption, but we have our fingers crossed.

[Cerise]

awww..gudluck with it..

[Ayvid N]

I really feel for this baby, this jewel. Could be she is heartless, could be she had compelling reasons. I would tell that baby not to wait but to make the most of the gift of life and all the wonders that it has to offer. Seek love elesewhere.

But...
The writer's sorrow and longing for the mother to still return is very touching. No words would suffice to aptly describe the sympathy felt by the reader. You impressed me here.

You write so well.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words...am glad you liked it...:)

[Renée]

First I want to say..I pray this is not true in your life...You capture the feeling of abandonment extremely well.. Heart wrenching write !

[Cerise]

No...I have a happy loving and caring family..:)..Thank you for your kind and wonderful words..:)

[Dominique]

I love it and now I am going to cry for those kids who are all abandoned out there. It was an amazing poem and I love it.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Dominique]

Your welcome. I always love reading your work. :)

[Cerise]

aww...Thank you again..:)

[Dominique]

Your welcome :)

[MOON]

Deep write sad , being abandoned by a mother soul destroying..

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)