Smoking a day kills a life away

the prolonged pain from cigarettes and problems from its continuous usage

 

The dead would rather wish to be alive

Here you are giving it all away in vain

Ended up plotting your own death

What I ask you, will you ever gain?

One puff is all you need, to kill a creature

And boom, it becomes a bad deed

Can't you think for once, how it will harm?

The young, the old, it’s like a bad luck charm

Addicted you are and you might forever be

Are those memories so unbearable to see?

You want to forget better find another way

Solution is in front, so you had better stay

 

Cigarette is not the problem to your matter

The only thing it will ever do is kill and shatter

Think of those suffering because you are insane

Who cannot breathe, Who are in profound pain?

 

Lungs collapsed, back cut open

It sounds horrible to even be spoken

Stand up and fight diseases on your way

For humanity’s sake stop with this play......

 

AN INNOCENT CIGARETTE A DAY WILL  RUIN YOUR LIFE IN A HUGE WAY...

Author's Note

Emphysema-is a long-term, progressive disease of the lungs caused by smoking...Each one of you can contribute in a huge way by not smoking...Every time you smoke your life decreases and I believe life is very precious to waste.

Reviews

[Nadia B.]

I wish this could be posted on every bar and in every public window possible. Very courageous of you to write this and thank you for standing up for those who are specifically allergic to cigarette smoke. It is absolutely heartless to smoke around a child, let alone other adults. It's bad enough that there is so much pollution in so many areas of the world that one can barely see the sky. It is a terrible addiction that yellows the teeth, the nails, discolors the skin, blackens the lungs, and destroys ones own breath. The worst part is, it reeks for miles and sticks to everything. I like the way you ask your questions, the boldness of it. Thank you so much for this poem, God bless you, and hope you may be free of smoke! Honestly I really feel for those who are addicted to cigarettes, who are unable to stop even though they wish they could. They are not bad people, they really do need help. It would be interesting to see a poem showing their perspective. Still thanks again for spreading the awareness!

[Cerise]

Thank you soooo much for such a wonderful review...I completely agree with you...I wish we styed in. Better world...I wish we could save them all...

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Wow, this is one brilliant piece of poetry. Having smoked both cigarettes and weed for 17 years, I can truly relate to this poem. Very thought provoking, thanks for sharing :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kidn words..:)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Yw :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Smokers are hard headed. Hard to brake bad habits. I agree with your poem. Cigarette kill with each cigarette. Good flow of thoughts. The poem had purpose and reason. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur wonderful words..:)

[Acer]

well, it's an another great poem indeed. loved it much because you've tried to show here reality...liked few lines,


Addicted you are and you might forever be
Are those memories so unbearable to see?
You want to forget better find another way
Solution is right in front, so you had better stay

Cigarette is not the problem to your matter
The only thing it will ever do is kill and shatter
Think of those suffering because you are insane
Who cannot breathe … Who are in profound pain?
Who wishes to re-write those days gone
Without any, more further complaint
.........

& to convey your message "Cigarette is injurious to health", & at last your last line was really good,

AN INNOCENT CIGARETTE A DAY WILL RUIN YOUR LIFE IN A HUGE WAY...,it's a truth indeed. loved much to read. well written once again, loved your tittle too after read out your this poem.

[Cerise]

Awww...it seems like u hav taken an oath to make me smile trhough out the day wid your wonderful words...Thank you am glad you liked it..:)

[Cerise]

And Thank you for taking the time out to review my work it means a great deal to me..:)

[Holly Mason]

very up to date topic interesting write thank you for sharing

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..:)

[AYVID N]

I admire you for this eye-opener. Every line is profound. You are a very talented writer. Please keep up the good work.

[Cerise]

Thank you again for your kind and motivating words..:)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome and I am thrilled to have discovered such a thinking feeling writer. It will be a treat to visit and re-visit your writings now on... :)

[Cerise]

Aww...you don't know how much your words mean to me..Thank you for everything you said it truly made my day..:)

[AYVID N]

you are welcome again. TC... :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this...It's sad that people get hooked in this habit, only destroying their lives and others around them.

Great Job

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to review..:)

[Frieda P]

I have no understanding of how to use my delicate brain apparently, as I puff another drag whilst reading this. It's still a good read, even though I am a slave to this habit. Message noted, brain on hold.

[Cerise]

lolz....its ok..that was just my another useless try to get someone to listen to me..make awareness not that anyone doesn't noe..still trying wudn't get me killed..:P..Thankyou..:)

[Sakshi]

Absolute delight to read this one. Infact I hit the share button and sent it to a few of my friends who smoke!! Its so hard to convince people not to, at least not when a non-smoker is around. I am an asthmatic, so it hurts more to see people ruining their perfectly healthy lungs while I try to balance my diet and exercise and take heaps of medication to keep my lungs fit.

But anyways, it was a great (emotional) read for me. Well done!

[Cerise]

Aww....Thankyou so much sakshi...true its very difficult to convince smokers to leave but if they get an actual idea of what too mcuh smoking leads to i bet nobody wud evn go near it....aww takecare of yourself...Thankyou again for such wonderful comment..:)

[ForeverNever]

Title was catchy, although this was slightly depressing, it was a nice read.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[_]

Mhmmmmm! *snaps in z formation* Not when once me and friends saw a man smoking when we were on the bus, we were slamming on the windows and were making the sign language gestures of NO! and smoking! and heartbreak and he laughed and stomped at his cigarette lol. :P GREAT POEM :D

[Cerise]

aww...lolz....thank you for sharing ur experience..:p...Thank you for your kind words..:)