My Lilliputian Pond

A Poem by Cerise

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Today I missed a step and crossed an unknown path

But the beauty of it, without doubt captured my heart

It is a foggy little memory I wish to tell...

It was a magical land with a sparkling spell

Its beauty was eye-catching, though no eye had seen

It was a small little place on an alien land

The place smelled of divine and heavenly fruit

Nature beckons and whispers gently...

A tiny, pure puddle with freshly, floating lilies,
Pebbles cushioning the round pond,
Floating dock and leaf with a unique bond
I went into a dream state, I just couldn't respond...

The whole scene was sitting on a lush green grass

With two huge trees and a beautiful swing sitting in between

Took the breath out of me, a dazzling sublime scene

And just when my eyes couldn’t bear without blinking

A wee little shut and open, the place was sinking...

My destiny awaited me somewhere far beyond

The peace and serenity, its beauty and purity

Is captured in my heart and soul

Someday I hope to go there again

Live the moment and retain it

Before a rose pink light splashes

A wonderful new dawn...

© 2012 Cerise

Author's Note

I came upon a bewitching place tried to add a few things and write down the piece..Let me know what you think..Thankyou...

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Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..

This is the poet's eye. You saw a place beyond the veil and yet overlapping with elements of this existence. These lines:

"And just when my eyes couldn’t bear without blinking
A wee little shut and open, the place was sinking..."

...are the embodiment of the poet's eye. Sometimes we can retain a lot, to write from, to try and remember but most of it is lost to mind. As though it was only a preview of what may be.

A wonderful rendition! Thank you for sharing.

Ufi