My Lilliputian Pond

Today I missed a step and crossed an unknown path

But the beauty of it, without doubt captured my heart

It is a foggy little memory I wish to tell...

It was a magical land with a sparkling spell

Its beauty was eye-catching, though no eye had seen 

It was a small little place on an alien land

The place smelled of divine and heavenly fruit

Nature beckons and whispers gently...

A tiny, pure puddle with freshly, floating lilies,
Pebbles cushioning the round pond,
Floating dock and leaf with a unique bond
I went into a dream state, I just couldn't respond...

The whole scene was sitting on a lush green grass

With two huge trees and a beautiful swing sitting in between

Took the breath out of me, a dazzling sublime scene

And just when my eyes couldn’t bear without blinking

A wee little shut and open, the place was sinking...

My destiny awaited me somewhere far beyond

The peace and serenity, its beauty and purity

Is captured in my heart and soul

Someday I hope to go there again  

Live the moment and retain it

Before a rose pink light splashes

A wonderful new dawn...

 

 

Author's Note

I came upon a bewitching place tried to add a few things and write down the piece..Let me know what you think..Thankyou...

Reviews

[TheJordBaker]

you've described this place wonderfully, I want to find it myself!! good work :)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou..:)

[Ahmad Cox]

I could feel it

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Starr Mist]

Very descriptive. I could imagine everything in your peom. Very good!

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much..:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

lovely poem with grace and charm and metaphors with such incisive description.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[afra]

good job ....i love it

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much,..it meant a lot..:)

[Bumble]

You wrote this so well that I could actually picture the place. Well done!

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your kind words..:)

[Bumble]

You are welcome!

[Dayran]

The sight of a floating lily reminds us that we are now the Gulliver on land. The discovery prompts us to review our dreams of long ago of the visions we thought we had about the greater ambition of life. It reminds us slowly before leading us down highway 1, on the way to fame and glory. You have to watch that first step though... the plank wobbles a little.

[Cerise]

very well said....Thankyou for such wonderful days..

[sierrasparks91]

incredible it is very descriptive thanks for sharing.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much..:)

[sierrasparks91]

welcome

[Allycat]

wow this is incredible!
I love how descriptive this is, and everything flows so nicely.
Wonderful job,
thank you for sharing :D

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou for ur kind words..:)

[Kelsey]

This is very descriptive and quite lovely. I enjoyed reading it and being taken to the place, wonderful job. :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much fro ur kind words..:)