My Lilliputian Pond

Today I missed a step and crossed an unknown path

But the beauty of it, without doubt captured my heart

It is a foggy little memory I wish to tell...

It was a magical land with a sparkling spell

Its beauty was eye-catching, though no eye had seen 

It was a small little place on an alien land

The place smelled of divine and heavenly fruit

Nature beckons and whispers gently...

A tiny, pure puddle with freshly, floating lilies,
Pebbles cushioning the round pond,
Floating dock and leaf with a unique bond
I went into a dream state, I just couldn't respond...

The whole scene was sitting on a lush green grass

With two huge trees and a beautiful swing sitting in between

Took the breath out of me, a dazzling sublime scene

And just when my eyes couldn’t bear without blinking

A wee little shut and open, the place was sinking...

My destiny awaited me somewhere far beyond

The peace and serenity, its beauty and purity

Is captured in my heart and soul

Someday I hope to go there again  

Live the moment and retain it

Before a rose pink light splashes

A wonderful new dawn...

 

 

Author's Note

I came upon a bewitching place tried to add a few things and write down the piece..Let me know what you think..Thankyou...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The good description took me to the Lilliputian Pond. I like the visions create strong statements. Good to have places that were beautiful and peaceful. I like the desire to return and enjoy the new dawn. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to read it...and Thank you for ur wonderful comments..:)

[marytownsend]

The vivid imagery captures the reader and the flow of the words is easy to follow! Very nicely written!

[Cerise]

Thankyou again for such wonderful words..:)

[Shay]

this is really great.. i enjoyed the imagery

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[.]

An AMAZING poem! Love your way of writing! 100/100 :D

[Cerise]

lolz..Thankyou sooo much for liking it..:)

[.]

No problem! :D

[Violet Dreams...]

beautiful write

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

what an luxurious little escapade depicted here...a bountiful haven of the mind, very nice

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Beck Louise]

This is just amazing in all honesty. Your writing here just flows so well and it really caught my attention from the very first line. Nice :)

[Cerise]

Awww..Thankyou so much for your lovely words..:)

[S]

It cascades, it's lovely :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou ..:)

[T. Logan]

I love this. It's very fantasy-like, which always catches my attention.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for such wonderful words..:)

[Tina Kline]

This is very enchanting...you did a wonderful job on this.
It's all so very beautiful!

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your kind words..:)