Road trip from Love to Heaven

a poem about a girl dreaming of her future with the boy she loves..:)

Once I had been to the pond of love

Dabbling and smoothing, 

My angels soft wings

Come from yonder, far above

He was my shining star

Come to save me on a dark night 

From the torment and pain

In an ostentatious little car

And that day shall not be very far

When we shall live in our sweet little world

Love and passion curled

When the morning rays will flow through

And I would wake you with my fresh morning dew

Wake you up on a bright new day

Give you a kiss before you go to work

Hoping you come without any more delay

I will dress up and put on a huge bright smile

I will cook for you and wait a while

Every day will be worthwhile

We are to be couples for life long

I promise to keep you smiling and happy

Till my breath leaves, my body and is gone

You can be strong, listen to our song

Till we unite again and move on

To the palace in paradise where we belong…..

Author's Note

Let me know how you felt...Thankyou..:)

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

you clearly hold a lot of love in your heart

[Cerise]

Aw..Thankyou..:)

[deepblue04]

I love how romantic this is, good job!

[Cerise]

Thankyou...:D..I am glad u liked it..:)

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

This is so elegantly beautiful! Very romantic and full of love. It has a nice flow to it as well. Great job!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Beck Louise]

Could be a song, amazingly simple :)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou for your amazing idea..:)..

[Pax]

romantic in simplistic family life settings...which is a great!

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much.:D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok Angels I can do but angels with fur-something to do with 'p***y'? it tends to get in your mouth. No kidding apart a nice little poem with soft tones but a little rhyme bound in places.

[Cerise]

Ahh there i changed it..:D...Thankyou..:)

[Amanda]

The last stanza is the best, great job :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou soo mcuh..:D