A Wish For A Wish Is A Dream Come True

Never ending wishes for new year

Let this new year be an important part of life

Let it be the harbinger of love and happiness just like a wonderful wife

May you smile at every possible moment of the day

May life smile upon you, leading you to a right and peaceful way

May you succeed and prosper through the troubles that lay

May your life be brightened by wisps of love and joy

May you get that shining star in a handsome boy

 

Life is not easy to mix and cook

But, it can provide you once in a while with a lovely book

Your way to success lies upon you

And for that hard work has to be true

May you have enchanting memories together

Be it alone or together, May you be happy forever

 

Leave everything behind and move on

Because there is nothing to be done

But to let bygone be bygone

Let us close our eyes and make a wish

May all of us smile and shine

Through all troubles that lay in line

May all the wishes come true

And you get a wish for every wish that’s deep within you

Without doubt it would be a dream come true..:)

Author's Note

This I had written for my new year..a list of wishes for all my near and dear ones..give your opinions...Thankyou..:)

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Ahh this piece tasted like a hint of metaphor, with emotive illusions of grammar and heartfelt verbs of vanilla on my tongue

[Cerise]

Lolz...that was the most amazing review i ever got..even though it went a lil above my head....thankyou for your kind words..:)...they were like cherry on top of cake..:P

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

:)

[emmy bon]

Hopes... yea! i wish that. well done

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Fifi]

Great and uplifting to read :) Really enjoyable.
I don't understand what the 'which lay' at the beginning of the second stanza is supposed to mean, though.

[Cerise]

Thankyou...which lay in the sense..that whatever troubles or hardships that come in your life may you find solutions to it and succeed..:)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Well,the new year has half passed..but how fresh and joyous this poem is...delivering the richness of thought ...very nicely written.

[Cerise]

Thankyou fro your kind words sir..:)

[Heather]

I could see this poem being spoken aloud, perhaps a toast to the new year. Well done, I liked it positiveness and cheer.

[Cerise]

Thankyou...:)

[Mark]

I think it's great. I liked the hopeful, upbeat thought of it.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much..:)

[That_Guy]

it's very refreshing to read a positive "Wishful" poem. well done

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[That_Guy]

;)

[lee von cleef]

May god bless those who's' ambitions out weigh their skills,speaking to myself not you.

[Cerise]

:)..may your wish come true

[KAREN]

Love your pharses, Love stanza three and four! Well written, and uplifting!!

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much...it meant a lot..:)

[Sakshi]

"Let it be the harbinger of love and happiness just like a wonderful wife"

"Life is not easy to mix and cook
But, it can provide you once in a while with a lovely book"

"Because there is nothing to be done
But to let bygone be bygone"

I find it inspiring... more than just a mere new year wish list for all near and dear ones..

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your kind words..:)