A Wish For A Wish Is A Dream Come True

Never ending wishes for new year

Let this new year be an important part of life

Let it be the harbinger of love and happiness just like a wonderful wife

May you smile at every possible moment of the day

May life smile upon you, leading you to a right and peaceful way

May you succeed and prosper through the troubles that lay

May your life be brightened by wisps of love and joy

May you get that shining star in a handsome boy

 

Life is not easy to mix and cook

But, it can provide you once in a while with a lovely book

Your way to success lies upon you

And for that hard work has to be true

May you have enchanting memories together

Be it alone or together, May you be happy forever

 

Leave everything behind and move on

Because there is nothing to be done

But to let bygone be bygone

Let us close our eyes and make a wish

May all of us smile and shine

Through all troubles that lay in line

May all the wishes come true

And you get a wish for every wish that’s deep within you

Without doubt it would be a dream come true..:)

Author's Note

This I had written for my new year..a list of wishes for all my near and dear ones..give your opinions...Thankyou..:)

Reviews

[Acer]

loved it again, few lines that i loved much

Life is not easy to mix and cook
But, it can provide you once in a while with a lovely book
Your way to success lies upon you
And for that hard work has to be true
May you have enchanting memories together
Be it alone or together, May you be happy forever......

beautiful words, well written once again.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderful words...:)..am glad u liked it

[Acer]

you're welcome :))

[Acer]

you're welcome :))

[Cerise]

:)

[quinfinn]

there is an innocence and a gentle persuasion herein which reaches out to the child in all of us. it has a very uplifting and optimistic quality about it and in parts, is, somewhat childish, but....this lends a special charm to the overall piece, whether intended or not this makes it a successful write. well done

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou soo mcuh for such wonderful words..:)

[quinfinn]

you are welcome. will you look at my new poem, "frozen love"? no one has given a review and i want to know what impressions are gleaned from it.

[Cerise]

ohh sure...:)

[I am renee]

thts beutiful

[Cerise]

the poem?...Then thank you..:)

[I am renee]

your welcome

[Cerise]

:)

[.]

L O V E D IT! :D Great flow and rhythm! :D

[Cerise]

Aww...Thankyou...:D

[.]

:D Ur welcome!

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

This poem is very innocent. I like it ;p

[Cerise]

Aww..hehe Thankyou...:)

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Your welcome :)

[Chris Rampersad]

This poem is pretty calming in my opinion, I enjoy that effect.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your poetry. A old fashion feel to your poetry.
"Life is not easy to mix and cook"
I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Dreams come true for the people who aim at good dreams and never give up. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your lovely words...:)

[Ees]

there is no part of life that is unimportant. Every piece is a part of you and moves you towards something else and is therefore very important.

I like this line: It has an old fashioned quality to it, but it also speaks of simple comfort: "Let it be the harbinger of love and happiness just like a wonderful wife"

Not everyone can succeed or prosper, because if everyone did we would see it as no one having prospered.

"May you succeed and prosper through everything, which lay"- which lay doesn't make any sense here.

SImple content of kind intent wishing the best for somebody else,
nice job

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[marytownsend]

I love the uplifting, happy feel of this poem! It made me smile all the way through and flowed easy right to the end! Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!!

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your wonderful words..:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

what a happy little poem!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome

[Sunny Skye]

I like it, it's good. I have no idea how to explain it :/, but i like the flow and the joy of this poem. Good job! Thank you for the excellent read. I enjoyed this one.

-SkyeBlanco

[Cerise]

Thankyou your words meant a lot..:)