Beware of Love trap

its a poem on pain of love

The pain is there somewhere

The love has passed long gone

Everything is still and silent

The crash of the heart is all that is heard

People say it will be all right

Nothing shall be same forever 

And am not going down without a fight

i wish we could stay together

Everything is lies; everything is dust in the eyes

I want to cry, yell or may be even die

My emotions are not mine to decide

Oh! Why me

Out of all the people why me

Love will not come ever again

He said he just could not explain

Was I just for fame , Where all those memories just a game

Or did I become too much of shame to be joined to your name

Was everything out of pity?

Everyone said I was pretty

Everyone said I was special 

Everyone said I was treasure 

So did you...

I ask my you darling where did I go wrong?

Was I too headstrong?

Was I too loud and impossible?

Was I irritating and unstoppable

We were to be a couple for lifelong

Then I ask you where I went wrong

Why did you leave me when I needed you most?

Why cheat on me was I devil or ghost

I will not fall into love trap again

It is a promise from which I shall not refrain...

Author's Note

please review and let me know of my new piece..:)

Reviews

[khalid]

simply, that is love. hurts all but we still love..i like it

[Cerise]

thankyou..:)

[Cynthia Man]

It's a great write! Love how this poem flow so nicely ! Love hurts a lot when it comes till the end, although I'd never experienced something like this, I love the way you bought the feeling to me! Love is really complicated, as it hurts you and make you feel better in the same time...
Anyway, a beautiful poem!

[Cerise]

thankyouuuuuuuuu,...:D....it meant alot...:)..i am glad u liked it

[That1Nerd23]

This is wonderful! I love the flow of your poem. Very nice! I also love how you expressed your emotions, driving descriptive thoughts into the mind of the reader and asking simplistic questions that help this poem to be all the more relatable. Excellent job!

[Cerise]

awwiiee..thankyou :D...it meant alot..glad u liked it..:)

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome! (:

[Soul Fire]

I love this! This is OUTSTANDING! Excellent work! Just absolutely amazing! Fantastic job!So Relatable and life-like.

[Cerise]

hehe....Thankyou sooooo much my dear lady..your words made my day...thankyou again it meant alot..:D

[Soul Fire]

You're so welcome

[Cerise]

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

The questions of love are hard. Love is a mystery few can understand and hold on to. I like the flow of thoughts and questions in the poem. I did like the ending. Sometime anger can make us wish to forget the desire of love. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thankyou for understanding my poem..:D....very well said its truly a mystery...:)

[Steven Cash]

I feel the s*** at the end is out of place

I mean, when the emotions are more raw earlier, you don't use profanity

I'm just saying even it out

or take that out at the end

wonderful poem tho

[Cerise]

thankyou for your opinion...i was actually planign to change it..:)..thankyou again..:)

[Steven Cash]

np

[Cerise]

:)...i jus changed it into love trap..u actually showed me the ryt path..i jus cudnt find a bettr wrd...until u said..it just tinged me...:P

[Steven Cash]

great!