Beware of Love trap

its a poem on pain of love

The pain is there somewhere

The love has passed long gone

Everything is still and silent

The crash of the heart is all that is heard

People say it will be all right

Nothing shall be same forever 

And am not going down without a fight

i wish we could stay together

Everything is lies; everything is dust in the eyes

I want to cry, yell or may be even die

My emotions are not mine to decide

Oh! Why me

Out of all the people why me

Love will not come ever again

He said he just could not explain

Was I just for fame , Where all those memories just a game

Or did I become too much of shame to be joined to your name

Was everything out of pity?

Everyone said I was pretty

Everyone said I was special 

Everyone said I was treasure 

So did you...

I ask my you darling where did I go wrong?

Was I too headstrong?

Was I too loud and impossible?

Was I irritating and unstoppable

We were to be a couple for lifelong

Then I ask you where I went wrong

Why did you leave me when I needed you most?

Why cheat on me was I devil or ghost

I will not fall into love trap again

It is a promise from which I shall not refrain...

Author's Note

please review and let me know of my new piece..:)

Reviews

[Dominique]

I know how you feel and this poem is so beautiful and relatable. I love it.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like you wrote aout your emotions so vividly!

[Cerise]

Thankyou...:)

[Jess]

oh my god what a wonderful piece,,;]]]]some says love is like a game,you may win or you may lose but despite of the heartaches and pains,you will be able to stand again,to let go of what you think is enough,,dont fall with that kind of trap again coz time will come that you can no longer escape ..and forever regret the decision you made,,,nice one fancyfatti;]]]

[Cerise]

Awww..Thankyou soo much fro your wonderful words am glad u liked it..made my day..:D.

[Sukhmeet Singh]

cool

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[quinfinn]

"oh, why me?" aye, now there's the rub. these three words speak more about the loss of love than anything else ... losing love challenges your pride, bruises your ego and damages your psyche..."oh, why me?" this says it all. i never get tired of writing and reading poems about love...guess i'm damaged goods...don't go down that path, love yourself and others will love you

[Cerise]

Aww..thankyou so much for your wonderful words..:)

[mandy]

as adele sings,,,sometimes it lasts in love, but sometimes it hurts instead. (i love that song.) your poem expresses that kind of pain, but there is a future, and happier times.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Jocasta]

Very evocative poem, can feel your pain.

[Cerise]

hey....Thankyou soo much..it meant a lot..:D

[Jetta Zippora]

Very emotional and beautiful. I've experienced serious heartbreak the past couple years and it is terrible to deal with those feelings. Moving on doesn't mean forgetting. And this poem expresses it all tragically and beautifully. Great write, friend.

[Cerise]

Thank you so much...believe me your review was very motivating and I thank you whole heartedly for appreciating it..:)..Thank you again..:D

[Dayran]

Being able to express our pain provides us with the opportunity to understand the root of it. It keeps us in contact with our feelings.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your wonderful words..:D

[Stanley Wilson]

Lovely well penned work

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D